Help · 2:15pm Mar 15th, 2023
I'm writing a story about Pipp and Zipp but I'm having a bit of a problem writing it. If you have any ideas, please let me know.
(Always before completing an idea, another idea comes to my mind and makes the work difficult.)
A cool breeze was blowing in the sky and it felt good to fly, Zipp storm was happily flying in the blue sky, looking for a suitable gift for her sister.
That day was the day of the best sister and Zipp wanted to find a suitable gift for her younger sister like every year. Of course, this time there was a small difference, Zipp and her sister were no longer in the heights of Zepher, and this made everything different.
A little further away, Pipp was also busy, she also wanted to find a suitable and perfect gift for his sister, maybe... he should have made a riddle for his sister because a few months ago, Zipp had become the official detective of Maritime Bay.
The first thing that came to Pipp's mind was that the thief was one of his friends' tools, just like when he hid Sunny's lantern so that Zipp could improve his detective skills and not lose hope of being a detective.
Just then, a thought came to Pipp's mind, a thought that could cause a lot of trouble, but... it might turn out to be the best day for his sister.
I wrote more than is here but I can't post it.
The story has not been edited yet.
Maybe Pipp does something similar by stealing something for Zipper to find but is caught by Hitch and put in jail for a short time, just an idea. I like how the story starts.
Oh. It's very good
I noticed that you used "his" instead of "her". Zipp is a female.
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Oh sorry
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No worries.