Mar
3rd
2023
Equestria Ninja Girls Segment 9 · 4:09am Mar 3rd, 2023
Greetings and Salutations, my name is Wrex and this is my review. It's time for another Equestria Ninja Girls review, this time on 'Magical Mayhem'. As the name implies, magic is going nuts at CHS and the group are trying to contain it. I got to admit it was pretty creative on the combination of original chapters and callbacks to 2003 episodes. I also found Blade Swipe's role in this adventure. This story has a lot of lessons, way too many for me to list off on here. But the one I will share is that it pays to have friends. Aside from some grammatical errors, this is a good addition. I give this story a 9.5 out of 10.
Yeah and it was challenging to go back and make corrections and such for
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Meh, still good
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Especially in the earlier developments when Blade was made too OOC and lashed out at Bright Eyes too often
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Oh, yeah
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That was my fault. I was inspired by the scene from the lion guard where Kion first met Mufasa and wanted on similar for Bright Eyes to meet Splinter.
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Dude, it's cool. We're all friends here
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Your heart was in the right place. This just wasn't the kind of series for a situation that deep with others getting so angry it makes them look like the bad guy in the scenario
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Thank you.
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Yeah. I just went overboard
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No problem
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It was also my fault too, as I wanted to make Blade as not good with kids at first, but decided to change that after I realized it wasn't the right direction.
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Jeb, it's okay.
Hey, maybe in your next Equestria Ninja Girls segment, you could go over the lessons in Magical Mayhem.
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Actually, the next one is Moo Mesa. I was planning complimenting the Boss on giving the series the Official Finale it needed.
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Ok.
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Sorry