Man, don't you hate it when you get frustrated and you go all out asshole? That happens sometimes. New chapter coming out tomorrow for those interested! Hopefully this doesn't end for a while.

In addition to the new chapter, I would like to see whether or not you guys want ANOTHER redo of the first couple of chapters. I am expanding on the first chapter already, because I think the two dislikes during the last chapter were a fault of the first chapter's cringe.

Good night!

My dislikes last night rocketed up to 11. As you may know (hopefully), I am a bit on the low side when it comes to self-esteem. I am prone to having fits when something like this happens, and it's borderline medical. Just in case, I have saved the entire story to my computer and Google Docs if I delete it in a drunken-stupor.

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Yes, my story has finally hit the rank of "The Answer to Life, the Universe, and Everything", at least, until someone else comes along and likes it. I may be doing something new when the story hits 42 in score, instead of upvotes. Thanks for reading, and expect a new chapter tomorrow!

I posted a chapter around Tal (spoiler and surprise surprise) and some politics he'll be involved in (woah bro cliches). I assure you the chapter was posted in clear day, caffeine at hand. This blog post, however, was not.

I really want to hear from you followers about the story you helped mold. Yes, you, the one wearing the shirt. Oh? You're naked and reading my blog for some reason? Let me get back to you in a second.

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One night I was exploring the internet when a thought - no, the fact, that PIT is a sucky story with no plot and is written like a 10 year old would write it, plot holes and band-aids for all the holes.

So, yeah, I feel like dog shit and until I fix my third chapter and give some kind of reasoning for the sappiness that is the last chapter's last paragraphs so far, I'm going to roll around and moan and complain.

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A long(ish) time ago, someone mentioned to me that I wrote in both first and third person, and that was a problem. Rewriting earlier chapters will not change the plot or interactions in the chapter, but instead rewrite it in a way which will put it back on rails with the rest of the story.

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Just a short word. I'm going to stick to 2-3k word chapters, because longer chapters are harder for me to write, and it takes longer to write. For our benefit, I'm going to keep it low for a while.

Thank you for supporting the story so far, and I hope that I can return the favor!

I think some readers here would enjoy hour long videos of me spinning in a chair and attempting to beat some video games. I have all the equipment and the account, but I need a good name and a game to play. Any suggestions?

Also, some videos I post may have some vlog posts about PIT (I love this acronym) and some about life. Livestreaming writing sessions and video games would also be very fun for me. If you have any ideas on what I should play, PM me or add it as a comment below.

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OH MAH GAWD I JUST RELEASED ANOTHER CHAPTER SO TIRED MY HEAD IS ACTUALLY FUCKING SPINNING RIGHT NOW. LIKE MY VISION JUST KINDA DOES ITS OWN THING. I'M PRETTY MUCH JUST TYPING WITHOUT THINKING NOW. I CAN'T THINK.

ALSO 667 STORY READS LOL DEVIL NUMBER DAE THINK FUNNY LEL TROLLLOL.

KEEP READING AND SMASHING F5 SO I CAN GET FREE FRONTPAGE SPOT SO I CAN BE KING OF FIMFICTION.

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I've been thinking about this for a while - while playing CS:GO and swimming, mostly, - but I thought an audio book would be cool for you guys. Is anyone up for that?

The only voice actors would be me and PastaFeli (Elizabeth). Taylor isn't the kind of guy who likes fanfiction, so I could do his voice. I'm trying to only use VAs of people I know in real life, as to make the recordings easier to do.

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