So, thisis just sitting on my google drive. I was originally going to add this into Man in a Pony’s World as a bonus chapter, but maybe i’ll tack it on as a sequel? i just haven’t finished it, and started not wanting to when i realized how unimportant this is to the rest of the story as a whole. would y’all like to see this completed and added on as a sequel or a bonus chapter?

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this is a rough draft:

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so, i am just retconning the most recent chapter. This time Bolt doesn’t die. he just makes the situation he’s in worse. most of the ‘Salt Lick’ will be the same. Just the ending will be different.

the retconned version will release some time after this post goes up.

Okay so, I plan on attempting to redeem Princess Celestia. This will be the start of it, but it won’t be the end. I wanna keep her a little jumpy after this. This being a rough draft of the next chapter. I know, sudden forgiveness, but this was brewing for months in the story’s timeline. I wanted Chrysalis to accidentally get Bob to try and bury the hachet with Celestia.

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so i was wondering how this draft is. this is basically complete, and just needs some minor editing to add clarity to stuff. Is this any good? i am working on another version to see how much better/worse it is compared to this.

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so the next chapter should be done… soon. I’m currently writing 3 chapters across 3 different stories and am trying to get ready to start a 4th chapter. here’s something to hold you for when this story updates.

aka just a wholesome Luna and Bob moment.

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