Okay so I finished a new chapter but I might need some with editing I'm not good at it and I listen to some of y'all comments so I'm asking for help with my story but I'll also try and help others in their stories because I see so many stories on hold so I might as well help them out.

And also if y'all can give me all the names of rule 63 of the male characters of My little pony because I can only remember only a view characters and thank you for your patients.