I've decided I'm going to keep The Experiments the way it is. Even though it's one of my weaker stories in describing detail and whatnot I like what I have and I had no idea why I was thinking about changing it? Maybe I was second guessing myself? But I have learned a lot now with my writing skills. I think this story gets better as it goes along anyway.

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In the story The Experiments I started reformatting the chapters from chapter 10 onward to fit 1st person point of view instead of flipping from 1st person to 3rd person point of view. I wanted the story from chapter 10 onward to have a more personal feel from the different points of view. It's still having an adventure dark theme to the story. I was thinking about maybe going back to the earlier chapters and reformat them so they match the rest of the story or should I just keep what I have

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