If you have any questions about the story's progress, come and chat with me in Ponytown.

I have been catching up on the errors a lot now; have noticed a lot of misspellings and wrong words in certain places; they were a little hard to catch but I caught them. Please reread and rate again. I'm sorry it was a pain reading.

I have been catching the errors I didn't notice at the beginning of the story that I now notice. Auto-correction can be such a pain sometimes; let's not forget the craked device that's almost 6 years old. For length-wise: At the beginning of the story, I do agree it should be longer than 1000 words, and that would be my second goal after fixing the errors in the story involving grammar, and punctuation.