What it is, yo

So, we've managed to make it to thirteen chapters (or one prologue and twelve chapters, if you like) of the fic, and while I can say I'm happy with my thoughts being down on page (screen) I can ALSO say that I'm not entirely satisfied with my work. Going back over earlier chapters (and even recent ones) I find myself cringing at the way things have flowed at points, in word choice or structure. A big part of this is the commentary and critique I've been getting from readers as we've gone (and

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