Chapter 2- Update (2/11) · 1:29pm Feb 11th, 2016
Hey everyone, last time you heard from me I said Chapter 2 was complete and I just needed to get it proofread. Well, I'm sorry to say that's simply not the case. I am rewriting chapter 2 because it was horrible. The structure's lacking, some moments feel forced, and later parts underwhelm the emotion and feeling I wanted this story to have. I don't know when it will be done, but trust me that the new draft will be far better than my current one.