Finally did a proper edit · 5:51pm Aug 5th, 2015
So I went through some of my stories and saw that this one needed some work. So I took down the chapter edited it out and posted it back up. It's a bit longer and fixed up a few things I missed. I'll probably be working on the other one shot I did later. But for now I hope that this made the story a bit better and please check out the story this was based on.