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Nov
19th
2015

Edits to My First Story · 7:02pm Nov 19th, 2015

Hey, I'm not dead! Actually, I've been working on my fourth story, but for now I've made a bunch of edits to my first story:

- recognizing that Discord doesn't need a mirror for interdimensional travel
- giving a little wink at the fourth wall
- changing some details to keep things more in line with Fluttershy's character
- adding messy, sexy detail to many of the scenes

I hope you enjoy it.

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Apr
20th
2015

Jack in Equestria Updates · 8:33pm Apr 20th, 2015

I have heavily edited and expanded my first story, "Jack in Equestria," combining it with what was "Jack in Equestria, Part 2," adding additional chapters, and adding a lot more detail and improving the pacing to existing scenes. If you read it before, you might want to read it again. I think it's been vastly improved.

My next story is already underway, and hopefully it will be better from the moment it's published.

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