So, I just got a review back from the Reviewer's Cafe for Not Every Mark is Cute. The reviewer said he thought Brawler had a bad case of the Mary Sue's, was 'badass' only in the emo hot topic sense, and was completely unlikable. He stated that he knew people who were 'fighters' and none of them act like Brawler. In fact he found the way Brawler acted to be insulting to people he cared about. He also couldn't get behind Brawler's goal of reintroducing violence to Equestria. Arguing that if

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Hey everyone. After extensive feedback of chapter 16 I decided to revise it. Not so much that you need to reread the whole thing though. Just a little explanation for Soul Magic and Celestia having a different reaction to the name on the wall.

The changes barely took more than five hundred words, so instead of rereading the whole chapter you can just read the revised parts here.

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Hey everyone. I hope you enjoy chapter 16 of Not Every Mark is cute. I'm sorry it took so long and I have no excuse for it. I was able to write 4,000 words in one night, why the hell did it take me months to write 5,000?

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Hey everyone. Sorry for not updating for a long ass time. A combo of college life and work keep me from working on NEMIC and I've started to work on other stories on the side that also keep me from updating. Those two stories are Lyra Darkest Dungeon and a RWBY fanfic on fanfiction.net. I love writing NEMIC but I love writing for the other two stories as well.

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Hey everyone. I am SO sorry for the long ass delay for Not Every Mark is Cute. I've been busy with (in chronological order) month break, preparation for finals, finals/AP tests, graduation, the graduation party, job hunting and my new job. But the chapter still shouldn't have taken this long. It was sitting at 3,985 words for like three weeks before I finally got off my ass and finished it.

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Hey everyone, just wanted to let you all know what's going on. I'm very sorry that it's taken me so long to update. I'm actually close to about 4,000 words into the next chapter, but I haven't been able to find the time to finish it. For reason being: End of the year assignments/tests, AP exams, Prom, Track and Field meets, and band concerts have eaten away most of my time. I've had some free time to write, but I'm usually exhausted to the point where I'd rather shut my brain off than write

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Revised Chapter 10 is up! Chapter 11 will come out tomorrow!