So a few chapters are done and edited. To explain some changes, Spike and Nashta are now wingless properly, so a lot has changed in the series of events involving them. Sombra is more of a consistent dick rather than a spastic one with a lot clearer goals and better transitions/interactions. I'd love it if ya'll checked it out.

I also retracted a LOT of chapters as I rewrite this story in order to ensure new viewers dont get confused.

Im alive, question is, was I ever dead in the first place?

I hear all the problems my writing has. I like to think I've gotten better. So Im taking the stuff there now and revising a lot in as few sessions as possible to keep the mentality I need to have consistent action and motivations. I got super off track with what the story was and want to fix that.

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New chapter up. Revision on the old one. Fim doesn't want to spam inboxes since its publish date was back in june...like two years ago. Finally back into it. Who knows where it goes from here, but I feel like there might be a small difference in my writing styles...

It sucked. It made me realized I had a huge continuity error and it tore my whole plot apart. Im going to rewrite it and adjust that plot to fit the error so that it wont change the whole story. Im very sorry for being so late admitting this. I was afraid of failing and just ignored it, praying it wouldnt be noticed. Im a bad guy. But I'll be working hard to fix it! Taking the chapter down for now. Im so sorry guys.

Nearly 4000 words in the upcoming chapter. And a lot blood. Cant wait to finish it today!

Windows decided to restart my computer without letting me save my work....so I lost a lot of great content so windows can update something that already works...WHY IS THIS STILL A THING THAT IT DOES?!

Bear with me people...new chapter just got postponed..