I'd Like Some Feedback and Criticism. · 5:49am Jun 14th, 2014
I had just posted my new story, The Filly Who Walked on the Moon, which is about Scootaloo being sent to the moon as an astronaut. It's a silly story, but I'm proud of the way it came out. So far, I have not received any reviews for it, and it's been up for a day. To those who have read it and favored it, what did you like about the story? Was it well-written? Any constructive criticism would be nice.