I will edit and fix my story when it is finished. · 4:26pm Jul 17th, 2014
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You know I think I might make the confrontation against Cash Bags be Solaires time to shine. As you are aware from chapter 11, the prototype is obviously going to be some kind of giant mech suit shaped like a diamond dog (like Ratchets prototypes but with much more destructive qualities). Why Solaire? Well I think you people have earned the right to see him do something for the town who treated him kindly.
Stay tuned for the next chapter of Kurai the Forsaken, Chapter 12: Praise the Sun!
Well, after how I have been building up how Applebloom wants to be Kurais wifey so bad I figured I might as well make a short nsfw story about the training they will be doing between chapter 10 and the upcoming chapter 11. (A story driven nsfw, none of that bad porno trash)
I have been thinking about it so far but what do you guys and gals think?
A battle between the obsidian scaled dragon of calamity or the first of the dead reborn with the skeletons of ponies?
I need your input as I have no idea how the final battle should start much later on.
As the title implies, it's one of my best chapters so far in my Dark Souls crossover. But others may not see it that way, that's fine. Your opinion is your opinion, but I do prefer constructive criticism rather than meaningless hate. Thank you all for supporting my fanfic thus far if you have.