I have recently edited my short story, Looking for an Angel, to clarify it
The story was designed to show her life flashing before her eyes, but it didn't come off as such.
I ask that you please re-read it and once again drop tips on how I can better it!
Thank you so much!
~Noman

Well, I noticed that I received four dislikes to my story.
I can guess that one or more of them are doing it because they are still upset about something that happened almost six months ago! Wow!
Three words for you; Get over it!
Anyways, now that I'm done ranting I'll get back to my story!
I expect a good amount of likes in the future!
! :D

I have just finished my new story, it is called Angels!
I haven't written in a while and couldn't find a pre-reader so please tolerate it!
Angels - NomanV1