right hi guys so in about three days i will be going completely inactive for about a month due to the fact that i have my schools grade ten camp to go to, i will also be focusing more on school work from that point so i wont be as active as i normally am since i want to be able to focus on my school work so The Life of Zephyr Star will be put on hold also i'm going to just redo the first chapter and place the 'first' chapter i have now at a later date (reposting just in case you missed it)

i'm going to re-write parts of the first chapter add some things and overall just give it a good hard review for those of you that have read it i want you to write down in the comments on either the story or this blog post. go on give me a good hard review don't hold back on me as i want this to be the best it possibly can