I edited it a bit, adding about 500 words onto it so there's a couple of new or different parts in it now. Mostly around the throne room scene. I also possibly made it a bit more open ended so now I can more easily sequelitis the crap out of it :D

By sequelitis i mean i think i can sequel/prequel about 2 or 3 times to this story instead of maybe 1 or 2.