So it’s done!
All the edits and revisions to my first story posted on FimFiction “Everything Hurts” are finally done!
Took a bit longer than I thought it would but I think that's a good thing as it allowed me to put more work into it.

I hope everypony here enjoys this story and all the shininess of the polish I put into it

The first MLP:FIM Fan-fiction I ever wrote was Everything Hurts and as such it is somewhat close to my heart. But as those of you who have read it know it's pretty rough (both in flow and grammar). I really like the story I created but as many have told me (and that I can see myself) it needs some polishing to shine.

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My first story I ever posted on the site was Everything Hurts and now I'm thinking that I need to edit it and maybe revamp some bits...

Revamping some of it might be going a little far but it needs someone to go though it and edit all the grammar and other mistakes out so at some point I'm going to try to find an editor to go though it.

For those you like the story you can look foreword to a cleaner version soon and maybe some changes to some bits if I'm feeling like I need to.