Alright, I'll be completely honest. I'm stuck on an interaction between two characters and I'm being a perfectionist about it. So, to hurry up and move the story along, it's going to lack the strong sense of severity I wanted to portray. Hopefully down the road I can rewrite it how I imagined. As I may have mentioned, I have the BARE BONES of the concept for this story, so plenty of the character development is going to be lacking. I didn't want anyone to get their hopes up for the next chapter

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