So basically, I want to say something.

This story was supposed to go ABSOLUTELY another way! When I was writing the 'prototype', I thought:

"Hm, what if I just change plot a bit?"

And there we are...To be honest, I'm not satisfied with this story, and I still have the 'Original' in my 'inventory'

So there is a question:

Would you guys like to continue with current situation

OR

Would you like to see the original?

(Just so you know, Original had 2 more characters)