The Story is still going to go the way i planned, however instead of making a sequel I'm going to build upon the first story. Act 1 tells the original story, then Act 2 tells its sequel and so on until Act 5 where it all ends. I look forward to this journey, and if anything I'll know that i tried.
Also the final versions of chapters 1-4 are released with no more edits coming for those 4.

Chapter 4 has been released, and coming soon Chapter 4.5 The Uncut Version.

Dear Readers & Writers
It is with deep regret to inform you, that i released chapter 3 a bit earlier than i had planned. So with chapter 3 comes new developments as well as new suprises and mysteries. So what are you waiting for read chapter 3 now! Also thanks for the 63 views, and if you want to see a sneak peek of chapter 4 look below the break on this post.

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Yes it has been updated, but nothing really major. I just uploaded a smoother chapter 1, and fixed a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. By Wednesday I'll release Update 1.2 The Chapter 2 Update, it will just have a smoother chapter 2. Then by Friday if everything goes accordingly to plan then Update 2.0 will be released containing Chapter 3 The Alicorn Beating Part 2. So anyway I'll post again when i release Chapter 3, and you can watch The Land of Equestria Part 1's comments for when Update

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Chapter 3 is still being reworked, but chapters 1&2 are under going editing to make it shine better. So by Wednesday Chapter 1&2 will be better, and smoother while Chapter 3 will be released by Friday and will come pre-smoothed. Thanks everyone who is reading it, and have a nice week...

Yes the first part of my two part story is live, and you can read the first two chapters now. Chapter 3 will be released in a day or two, and once all 8 chapters are released i will begin setting Part 2 up to be released. So anyway be prepared for Creepy Dummy's, Puppet Ponies and much much more. Cause it all begins now!!!!!!!

I originally joined to watch, follow, comment and read stories. Though now I've been bitten by the writing bug, nasty fellow. So anyway my story will have my version of Doji and Starlight, Twilight and the main antagonist Slappy. So once its approved enjoy, if you want to help with the story message me and you can make the chapters more fluid. Cause even though I've finished both Part 1 and 2 they need heavy editing, and more dialogue. So anyway bye and remember Love me or hate me I'm still in

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