Michael will no longer be speaking in the present tense. I experimented with it in the previous chapters and wasn't convinced enough to stick to it. So, Mike'll be speaking in first person past tense, like Chrysalis. Perspectives will be random with the goal to eventually focus mostly on Chrysalis. The plot's going to hit the fan here in the next couple of chapters, so I hope you guys have been enjoying what's been going on to this point.

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Coming soon to your screen! Now with 35% less fat!

Only because I like to remind myself of the direction I want to develop Chrysalis...and why she's one of the most popular characters.

If you want the link to my GDoc, just PM me. You'll be able to comment as the chapter develops. Limit will be three readers. You'll get credited with the pre-read. Remember your input is invaluable to me, even if I don't use your suggestions. Reading the thoughts of my readers is important.

Thanks for your thoughts!

Currently the chapter is only 1/3 done.

Hmm...I think the next story arc is starting swimmingly!

There's a couple of things of note: It will be in 3rd person. There will be an expansion of characters in the story, if only to serve to move the main story along.

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I need a quick pre-read and edit. I wrote this quickly, so there will probably be errors. It's not a long chapter. Send me a PM if interested. Needs to be done by tonight.

Thank you!

Blog title says it all. Feel free to post your comments and dissertations on what you think she should be.

Just kidding. As the story shifts, I'm going to start giving you guys a little more about our mysterious Empress and just what the heck she really is!

In future chapters, there will be the following. Choose those that don't belong. There can be more than one choice.

1.) Blueblood
2.) Octavia
3.) Lyra Heartstrings
4.) Changelings
5.) Chuck Norris

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...just needs a proper editing and will then be good to go.

I've decided to go ahead and keep it one chapter, so it'll be as big or bigger than the last one. Glad to have something go as planned!

Chapter eleven is so big, I'll have to cut in in half. I'm looking at 13k words just at a glance! I'm just getting to the conclusion of the chapter, thus closing the current story arc. I wonder if eleven or twelve chapters are a lot for an arc? I don't know. I've honestly not paid attention to story arcs until I started this fic. I simply wrote.

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If you are interested, send me a PM and I'll give you the link to the GDoc. You can comment on there what you like and don't like. It's not as comedic and focuses a little more on how the relationship is between Mike and Chryssie. Tell me what you like and don't like and don't hold anything back. I want this to be a quality story and I'm very pleased with what's been presented to you gentle readers to this point of the story.

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I poked around DeviantArt for a bit and found this guy. I saw some of his art and saw a couple of very good examples of art he's done. I asked for and received permission to use one of his pieces. Do him a favor and see what he's got!

Very, very, very impressed with his work!

Editing chapter nine and considering making a few changes to ten. Chapter eleven is being written.

Chapter eight might be modified down the road, but for now, enjoy!

This is what I have. Comments and suggestions welcome. I'm trying to make sure the characters stay more or less in character in regards to canon.

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This is just to let you guys know the story is progressing and I haven't forgotten you.

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Chapter 11 of "My Daughter Chrysalis" is going to introduce the changeling queens. All eleven of them (other than Chrysalis). Queen Druanae is spoken for and I haven't had a chance to come up with other names. I've got ideas, but at the moment I'm fleshing out the story and haven't gotten past "Queen A" and "Queen B", for example.

The Empress' name is set, so don't ask about her.

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I did warn you...

Thoughts?

"Troubled, child?" asked a voice next to me. I jumped a little and turned to see Fancy Pants regarding me like a distant uncle seeing his neice for the first time. Or was that a rape face? I had no idea. "You look lost in your thoughts."

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Chapters written.
Chapter Seven - Published.
Chapter Eight - Written, waiting to be edited.
Chapter Nine - Written, waiting to be edited.
Chapter Ten - Written, waiting to be edited.

Chapter length:
Chapter Seven - 9.1k
Chapter Eight - 8.5k
Chapter Nine - 6.5k
Chapter Ten - 13.1k

Chapter Eleven started.

Chapters Planned in Total:

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Remember when I posted the blog about my head canon on why Celestia and Luna can't have foals? I've decided to explore such a story and delve into the world of immortality and the price paid for having near infinite power and godlike abilities....What I have so far in the first chapter/prologue (I might just call it the first chapter) has grown into something that might become very special to me. Yeah, I know it's all a part of something that doesn't really exist, but an imagination is a

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Whilst I await my editor to get back to me with the completed edit (he's still recovering from illness and wound up swamped with other responsibilities), I thought I would give you guys a little portion of the story for your enjoyment. Chrysalis gets her POV at last and you guys get a taste of how she thinks after being raised by a guy like Mike. Let me just say, like father, like daughter. Enjoy!

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