The story, Ancient Treasures, is about a changeling who leaves his massive stable to explore the wasteland. The thing is, I need to write at least seven chapters before febuary, and at the pace I'm going it should be near that quickly enough but I'm not editing. The story does contain explicit content, including sections that may delve into Clop, but those sections are not realy things that need to much attention. The thing is, at this pace I'm not going back and trying to explain things better I'm just getting the story over time. If anyone would be willing to comeover and look at the story, simply help me try and get the story across a little better because even wrighting it I know the way I'm saying it could be done way better, I would be greatlful for the help.