I guess this can also be somewhat of a story idea

sung to this song

Context: an unintended result of two of the Elements of harmony venturing into the Griffon Kingdoms to spread the magic of friendship was the kingdom's' new-found sense of comradery, quickly leading to them rising up against Equestria, who had been ruling over the kingdoms in the absence of their own king

Blood of Grippenstön

Another time has come to fight
Griffins must unite
We'll make a stand on eastern ground
To put a challenge to the crown

We are one
We have come
We're here to bring an end to occupation
We have our nation's fate in hand
This time we make our final stand

Rally all the clans
Equestrians advance
Blood of Grippenstön*
Point of no return

Join the Griffin revolution
Freedom must be won by blood
Now we call for revolution
Play the pipes and cry out loud!

We need a king to rule our land
A king to take command
It is the crown that's in our sights
And it's the reason we will fight

To attack!
Send them back!
Until we see the new king's coronation
For we are Griff's with pikes in hand
And we will die to claim our land

Rally all the clans
Halt the Equines' plans
Charge at Grippenstön
Freedom we shall earn

Join the Griffin revolution
Freedom must be won by blood
Now we call for revolution
Play the pipes and cry out loud!

~solo~

And as the old king lost his crown
And Equestria failed to succeed it
Play the tunes of victory
Play them higher and higher tonight

Rally!* Shock the world!
Lead us to this day
Here at Grippenstön
Freedom we have earned
(N-N-N-N-N-N-Noooooooooooooo!)
Join the Griffin revolution
Freedom must be won by blood
Now we call for revolution
Play the pipes and cry out loud!

Join the Griffin revolution
Freedom must be won by blood
Now we come for revolution
PLAY THE PIPES AND CRY OUT LOUD!

*Grippenstön: old Griffin for Griffinstone (pronounced Grippen-sturn), a little bit of extra world building to help the lyrics flow

also, some tips or suggestions to make it flow better would be much appreciated

parodies are fine. i like the concept of this one!

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I do that a whole lot

A Cry For Help
HELP! A BRONY IS GONNA COMMIT SUICIDE!
Songs From The Heart has a new thread posted by Doom trooper hellflyer · 7:29am
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So long by doom
I'm sorry everyone but I've had enough. My life is starting to get way to tough. The cutting is no longer working. I can't stop the sadness and pain; I'm tired of suffering. I know this is the last thing all of you want to see. But, this is the last letter that all of you will get from me. I don't mean to hurt and of you. But this is something I have to do. No worries all of you will forget about me. Because in the future I will just be a fading bad memory. Beside you all already know my story. I had no love from my past friend and my family. I'm to weak to finish typing this. I've lost so much blood from my wrist. So long everybody live good life's. Just forget about this idiot who chose to die!
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Doom Trooper is gonna kill himself! No joke!
Help Him! I can't take another brony suicde!

nvm turned out his "letter" was a rhyming song O-o no-ones gonna die...