https://www.fimfiction.net/story/384309/mlp-world-war

Hey everyone, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read some of this story and give helpful feedback. Right now I would be very grateful to anyone who could take the time.  This is, after all, a good place to shamelessly promote whatever I feel like, so I figured why not. The story is portrayed very similarly to events of WWII with some changes. (I.E. Adolf Discord, GerMANEy)

Hope ya check it out!