Total score: 83/100 Plot line: 9/10 Complexity: 9/10 Character development: 9/10 Length: 7/10 Spelling/Grammer: 9/10 Mood: 10/10 Uniqueness: 10/10 My personal thoughts: I liked this allot! The only reason I gave only 7 points to length is because it is incomplete. 20/30
Total score: 66/100 Plot line: 6/10 Complexity: 7/10 Character development: 8/10 Length: 6/10 Spelling/Grammer: 9/10 Mood: 8/10 Uniqueness: 7/10 Your personal thoughts: I liked this! Especially because it gives a story to Team Fortress as well. 15/30
Total score 30/100 Plot line 4/10 Complexity 3/10 Character development 2/10 Length 9/10 Spelling/grammer 8/10 mood /5/10 uniqueness 3/10 Personal thoughts: I hated this story. If you'r a Harry Potter fan,know about Britain,like Doctor Who/Doctor Whooves Don't read it.
Total score: 40/100 Plot line: 4/10 Complexity: 4/10 Character development: 3/10 Length: 2/10 Spelling/Grammer: 5/10 Mood: 6/10 Uniqueness: 6/10 Your personal thoughts: (Sorry for giving this such a low rating) In the second chapter I started to get confused and it went downhill from there... I think it has potential but try not to rush things so much. 10/30
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Awakening
Total score: 83/100
Plot line: 9/10
Complexity: 9/10
Character development: 9/10
Length: 7/10
Spelling/Grammer: 9/10
Mood: 10/10
Uniqueness: 10/10
My personal thoughts: I liked this allot! The only reason I gave only 7 points to length is because it is incomplete. 20/30
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My Little Fortress: Teamwork Is Magic
Total score: 66/100
Plot line: 6/10
Complexity: 7/10
Character development: 8/10
Length: 6/10
Spelling/Grammer: 9/10
Mood: 8/10
Uniqueness: 7/10
Your personal thoughts: I liked this! Especially because it gives a story to Team Fortress as well. 15/30
NLRforeverloyal Member of The Lunar Review Bureau
Harry Potter: Into Darkness
Total score 30/100
Plot line 4/10
Complexity 3/10
Character development 2/10
Length 9/10
Spelling/grammer 8/10
mood /5/10
uniqueness 3/10
Personal thoughts: I hated this story. If you'r a Harry Potter fan,know about Britain,like Doctor Who/Doctor Whooves Don't read it.
Squibdude98 of Lunar Review Bureau
Doctor Who: Issue 1: The New World
Total score: 40/100
Plot line: 4/10
Complexity: 4/10
Character development: 3/10
Length: 2/10
Spelling/Grammer: 5/10
Mood: 6/10
Uniqueness: 6/10
Your personal thoughts: (Sorry for giving this such a low rating) In the second chapter I started to get confused and it went downhill from there... I think it has potential but try not to rush things so much. 10/30
NLRforeverloyal Member of The Lunar Review Bureau