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Awakening

Total score: 83/100
Plot line: 9/10
Complexity: 9/10
Character development: 9/10
Length: 7/10
Spelling/Grammer: 9/10
Mood: 10/10
Uniqueness: 10/10
My personal thoughts: I liked this allot! The only reason I gave only 7 points to length is because it is incomplete. 20/30

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My Little Fortress: Teamwork Is Magic

Total score: 66/100
Plot line: 6/10
Complexity: 7/10
Character development: 8/10
Length: 6/10
Spelling/Grammer: 9/10
Mood: 8/10
Uniqueness: 7/10
Your personal thoughts: I liked this! Especially because it gives a story to Team Fortress as well. 15/30

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Harry Potter: Into Darkness

Total score 30/100
Plot line 4/10
Complexity 3/10
Character development 2/10
Length 9/10
Spelling/grammer 8/10
mood /5/10
uniqueness 3/10
Personal thoughts: I hated this story. If you'r a Harry Potter fan,know about Britain,like Doctor Who/Doctor Whooves Don't read it.

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Doctor Who: Issue 1: The New World

Total score: 40/100
Plot line: 4/10
Complexity: 4/10
Character development: 3/10
Length: 2/10
Spelling/Grammer: 5/10
Mood: 6/10
Uniqueness: 6/10
Your personal thoughts: (Sorry for giving this such a low rating) In the second chapter I started to get confused and it went downhill from there... I think it has potential but try not to rush things so much. 10/30

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