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This story is a sequel to Light and Dark
Following Tirek's defeat, Twilight Sparkle has reformed and is now the Princess of Friendship. Now she is spending her time spreading the magic of friendship across from Equestria while further proving her redemption to everypony and that she truly deserves her newly established power and position through the adventures she and her friends face during the events of Season 5 of Friendship is Magic onwards.
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Title is familiar, going to read soon.
Thus begins the sequel.
"So it begins" the dark armored figure began as he monitored Twilight Sparkle and her friends from a good distance away "her road to forgiveness as well as redemption which will be a long and hard one but I know she'll persevere to the end and come out stronger than before."
In the last chapter she spotted the three Sugar Belle, Night Glider and Party Favor talking to the mane 6 about wanting there cutie marks back and in this chapter Starlight asked Fluttershy to say who they were like if she didn’t know who it was. I’m kinda confused there.
She wanted to single which one told the mane 6 and the other ponies involved about the cutie mark vault and Party Favor took all of the heat to keep Night Glider and Sugar Belle from getting in trouble too.
If this is still confusing I apologize and I’ll take another look at revising it so it makes sense.
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Oh ok that make sense. Thanks for the clarification.
Are you going to do the rest of the seasons?
I didn't really need the A/N to know you parodied You're a Mean One. Mr.Grinch which I actually laughed when I realized that you did that.
Original Animated version: Superior Live Action: Inferior.
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We'll see once I get through the Season 5 arc.
I love this once again. I just wish Twilight showed a bit more a emotions when Rainbow dash told her how she felt when she almost lost her when she was fighting with Tirek.
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Wish granted as i decided after some thought to revise the scene between Twilight and Rainbow Dash so that Twilight tears up with her friends to show how remorseful she is for the pain she caused her and how much it impacted her.
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I love it! It makes me feel like tearing up as well just reading it.
If I may be honest, this story frustrates me slightly. If the girls truely forgive Twilight, they would stop mentioning the things she did as Midnight. I understand you are most likely doing a thing similar to how the Rainbooms kept mentioning Sunset's mistakes, and that does make sense, it just still annoys me. I just wanted to be honest and share my feelinhs
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It’s all right. It’s just your honest opinion. Are there any parts of the story in particular that comes across that the Mane Five are still holding it against her because I’m pretty sure I wrote down that they aren’t holding anything against her.
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Not really anything specific, It's just the fact that they keep mentioning it. I understand an accident where it just slips out, but it seems to be happening more often than it should, making it seem like the main 5 aren't over the events, and are still kinda holding it against her a bit
Interesting.
On Starlight's plan gooooood luck with that.
Karma! Karma! Karma! *punch* OW!
A great start for this promising sequel. Good to see that Twi still can outsmart her foes. It would be interesting to see the rewrite of the Gauntlet of Fire, I would like to see how THIS Twilight deals with Garble
You know my Bionicle OC would be perfect for taking care of it even though it'd be compared to a snack.
Dark Magic = Mm... delicious. alt. Was that supposed to do something else to me?
Light Magic = Aah! IT BURNS!
Chaos Magic = ???
Am I really the first (and only one) who gave a like to this story or I just can't see the others for some reason?
Nice chapter, but when Twilight began singing about how Cadance and love helped her back from darkness, it felt that it would've been better if she sang about the just married couple or love in general, I mean it's Matilda's and Cranky's wedding, it is their big day and it's not kind of rude to try to take all the spotlight on such an event?
Sorry if I am rambling, just meant it as a bit of advice.
Poor Moondancer, I suspected that Twilight's past actions affected Moondancer more than in canon, but I thought it would be because she was saddened by Twilight's assumed death,then felt angry and betrayed when she learned that she was alive.
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I can see the likes and dislikes perfectly fine, just needed the right number of votes for it to be visible for all eyes to see.
Ah yes the pointless cycle of revenge where there're no victors only vanquished with the only way to break it is to take part of it no more.
Oh colt, incoming disaster!
I can not wait!
Interesting take.
Wow I did not see that coming! THIS IS SO EXCITING!!!! 😆
Very interesting, can’t wait to read what’s next.
What’s with this dark mist?
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Without giving away spoilers, it is something that will play a role into this story going forward which will be answered in the following chapters.
So without her friends, Twilight would've walked down the dark path sooner. There goes the "Moondancer's life is what Twilight would've became without friendship" theory.
The dark mist or it's plan will be the next final confrontation that must be stopped.
I thought that Twilight as she took back Starlight to the first Wedding, she would show her the train accident she has created, to show her the price other's paid for her revenge, to see use her own actions as an example to show Starlight how her actions too could hurt innocents.
It was an excellent chapter, especially since we never saw in canon what would've became of Twilight without Celestia's guidance and Spike. Honestly, it's almost scary how possible that turn of events could've been. I mean if Flim and Flam somehow were able to overthrow Celestia and become real villains, the it's not that unreasonable, I mean a little misunderstanding between Starlight and Sunburst lead to all that chaos in canon, Celestia being too insensitive to Twilight's feelings when she failed the exam could've played out similarly. I can't wait for the next triple chapter update, good luck with it by the way.
Heh, nice.
I love how well you fit the movie in. I also really like how Starlight was able to join.
I love it! I love the Starlight moment. She is always the one to have Twilight’s back. Great Job once again!
Really excited for the 2 part opening! I really want to know what the dark magic going to do!
I thought they already has given up the Elements to the Tree of Harmony. Also, it feels strange that "former evil mastermind" Twilight being so slow to adjust to the human world, but at least she remembered her orb, that's a very useful tool.
Welp this just added a whole new level of uh-oh.
"Hmm... perhaps I should've used my shadow hand on that mist after all oh well hopefully Young Twilight and her friends can handle it and if they can't? I get have a little fun... I've never crushed the will of a pony much less one born out of the literal darkness nor absorbed them with my shadow hand which it's been a long time since I've used it in that way as the last time was what? I faced wendigos." stated the dark armored figure after deactivating his chameleon power and teleporting away.
Well, for those who have read this far, that was certainly an interesting turn of events in these last 2 chapters. Wouldn't any of you agree?
OMG THIS IS SO GOOD!!! I had a feeling that something like this was going to happen. LOVE AND ENJOY THIS!
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Totally agreed!
This is so exciting! I was not expecting Tempest at all in the end. I can’t wait to see what Midnight does next!
I first thought that Midnight would team up with Chrysalis, but this is even better. I bet that Midnight will SO betray Tempest and "We-Know-Who" when the time is right.
Nice work!
What will the episode School Daze will bring onto your story?
Good thing that RD didn't prank my OC otherwise he'd retaliate... with a prank of his own then say "Never prank an over three million sixteen thousand year old pro." or "Oh, so it's war then?" or say "Of course you realize this means war."
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Not sure yet since I'm still putting together Act 2 of the story. But I'll figure it out once I cross that bridge.
Nice Job on the changes in the story. It totally fits great!