Weird and unique creatures (Pokemon) start appearing all over Equestria, from Ponyville to Canterlot. The creatures seem friendly though.
Could the appearance of these creatures have something to do with the odd comet that popped up in the sky one night?
Note:I will add more character tags as the story progresses.
double note: thank you the myth for editing this, wuv you lots bro!
triple note: the story takes place before season 3.
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As much as I'd like a Pokemon crossover, a story that doesn't even spell "Ponies" correctly in the title doesn't make a good first impression
894112 ahh don't worry bro, it will get better, don't worry.
even i'm unsure!
Honestly, the characters seem to stress, "Rare species" A LOT in this story, but who could blame them? The've never seen anything like a Pokemon before!
And, btw, Eevee was my favorite Pokemon when I was into them.
894650 Thank you bro!
that's what the pokemon are at the moment, rare, undiscoverd species in there world!
I always thought Eevee was a fox, not a kitty. Anyway, good story!
895965 i beleave vulpix is the fox, and eevee is more of a kitty based pokemon.
Ok, you need some editing. Mind if I work my magic keyboard?
~Ykke
you mite want to make the title a bit clearer because I thought this was a Digimon crossover but I'm digging this story
you should give Pinkie a ghost pokemon
900671 okay, sorry for the confusion bro.
taokaka: mister is confused? why?
he thought it was digimon, not pokemon.
taokaka: ahh okay ezio head.
and pinkie with a ghost type... any you have in mind?
900808 Banette
903236 "shudders" ooh that's a creepy bucking pokemon! good choice!
OOH, have a Sudowudo hanging out in Sweet Apple Acres and freak out Applejack when she tries to buck it thinking it's just another tree.
904204 i knew someone would say that! tao, you owe my 5 quid!
taokaka: okay fine. "gives the fiver"
still, an interesting idea at least.
904336 Or maybe a Heracross (or however you spell that) since they eat tree sap.
Perhaps maybe a Taillow for Rainbow Dash
908772 hmm... maybe, heracross is awesome! and it would fit with one pony or another.
909910 i've already got a flying type for dash, but good idea bro.
I finaly got some free time where i could read yours story. I have to admit, i know very little about Pokemon, but non the less... THIS WAS SO CUTE.
I can just imagen Budew and Rarity together.
920996 glad you enjoy it bro, nice to hear you like it.
taokaka: tao would like it, but tao can't read.
umm... spec could you maybe?
I thought fluttershy would get the eevee. Twighlight could have gotten an abra.
Try to make chapter 6 about 3,000 words. Longer chapters mean more development. More development means more likes.
And I thought FOR SURE Rainbow was gonna get a crobat. Those things are WICKED fast
936349 you see, the problem with crobat is that while it's fast, it dosen't fit dash that well.
i mean crobat is bucking awesome, but it dosen't fit dash... now trixie, that's a maybe.
the first 6 chapters are the mane 6 getting there pokemons, but i will have them meet up in chapter 7.
936332 WHY DOES EVERYONE SAY ABRA?!
eevee evolves into: flareon, vaporeon, jolteon, umbreon, espeon, glaceon and leafeon!
besides, abra would just teleport!
and we all know that feeling...
Pinkie's gonna get Ditto isn't she?
937355 not even close!
937439
Anyway, The thing with short chapters is that there is a lack of detail. If you could add more details, even to the most(to you) insignificant thing, it may just help you with your quality.
Not that its bad, or terrible, just... they seem a bit rushed. Im not seeing that many spelling or grammar errors though.
So al in all, keep up the good work.
937631 aww thanks bro. most of my storys start with shorts chapters, the detail will pick up later, don't worry.
*reads title* please be arbok please be arbok pleeeeaaassee
oh, its dratini... well I guess tha-WHAAAAAAAT?
If this soon-to-be dragonite comes into any harm, the world is dead.
good job again
975602 my friend, we love dragonite, i would never hurt him!! except with a ice type like suicune.
also, i love your reaction! oh its a dratini WHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY the reaction bro?
Because dragonites are just to destructively powerful for ponyville to handle.
and I don't really consider dratini to be the first thing that comes to mind when you say "snake"
suicune is a water type......
975661 oh i'm such a silly filly.
and hay, it's better then a garchomp! or a flygon.. besides dratini is cute!
I said it before and I will one more time. Give Pinkie a ghost
975726 jeez dude, be patient you silly filly.
taokaka: mister, tao could give you a big hug of tao ness!
Pinkie should get Shuppet
Sweetie should get Abra
Scoots should get Joltik
978209 pinkie: aww!!! there sooo cute!!!
sweetie: i dunno..they teleport a lot.. but thanks.
scoots: that's tiny! i might step on it!
1010235 hmm..the baby cakes could cry, witch would supple some food.
1010235 also... poffins can be given to shuppets as food, along with berrys
You took my recommended
1011295 of course i did!
now give me a hug!
When come Pokémon batte's
1011537 don't worry, just be patient!
I have an briljant idea scooterloo with an torchic
1011646 BUCKING GENIUS!!!
LET ME HUG YOU!!!!
I have an other idea princess luna with an lunatone
1015544 ha! i knew someone would say that pair.. but go on?
hay if you want, you and i can write the lunatone and luna chapters.. you just have to give me a basic idea for chapters and such.
i'm very bad at writing fics i tried once and that one wasn't good
1015740 ahh bro, you don't have to write it, just give me a basic idea for the chapters and such.
this is how i had it in my head: scooterloo wakes up in the cutie mark crusader club house after a night sleeping in it and she right in front of her a strange chicken like creature (torchic) and becomes friends with it: and that is how far i have it yet
p.s have you read the story called hoennshy because it's a very good fanfic
1016133 aww... sounds really cute!
thank you?
1016147 your welcome, now give me hug!