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Rainbow Reshiram


Just trying my best

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This story is a sequel to Transform


A few months after the events of Transform, Reshiram recieves a warning in the form of a dream. Things get scary when the dream is reality. She finds a cute Alicorn foal, a filly with two pairs of wings, who she adopts and names Oreo Mist. Evil is plotting it's scheme as Oreo Mist grows up. What will become of our little filly?

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 37 )

..........well that was fast......

i hope that Twilight dose not do something mean to make them mad at her or something like that in the next chapter and yay for the sequel i love it :pinkiehappy: and can't wait for the next chapter to come out

She was clearly an orphan,

ummm......I'm sorry but....what? She just found her in the forest, that doesn't mean she is an orphan, she could just be lost or something like that. I know this might be nitpicking but that line really irritates me.:twilightangry2:

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its just if you found a random kid that was lost and then you "adopt" them without asking questions if they have a family or not *cough.kidnapping.cough*

4003061 :fluttershysad: What have I done?! :fluttercry: I feel so terrible now....

So this is what happens when you post stories that you wrote in 7th grade on the Internet and your childish self doesn't see things like this....

:derpyderp2:

Should I fix this horrible thing I have allowed to happen? I feel like I should, but I'm not quite sure....

Sorry if it sounds like I'm taking it too seriously, but it sounds pretty serious. :rainbowderp:

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It would help if there was dialogue between them and Reshiram asks where she came from and where are her parents, the filly says she doesn't have any and so Reshiram decides to adopt her. Maybe a bit rushed but the whole story kind of is any way but it works:pinkiesmile:

4004387 Good idea, but when Reshiram finds her, the filly is (in human years) a toddler, and can't really talk yet. :derpytongue2:

Besides, anypony who would leave a cute filly out in a forest must not want to take on the role of being a parent. They may have wanted to keep their filly a secret, so they didn't take her to an orphanage or legally put her up for adoption. Sure, maybe the filly was with her parent in the forest and got lost, but barely anypony goes into the Everfree Forest, especially with a filly. If the Everfree Forest is as scary as everypony says, why would you even go in there in the first place? :rainbowhuh: (Plus, this goes against what my headcannon says about the filly's origin, which I may add in the story later. ;) )

yeah it is short but yay for the next chapter going to be longer to make up for it and i like it

i liked this chapter longer :pinkiehappy: great job on it

nice chapter and (when dose is your spring break start)

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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Did you make that? Even if you didn't, it's still hilarious!

I :heart: Reshiram, too. She is my favorite 5th Gen. Pokemon, with Zekrom as a close second. :scootangel:

4054421 The week after this coming week! :pinkiehappy: :yay: :twilightsheepish: :rainbowkiss:

....Sorry, I'm just really happy because I won't have to worry about algebra for A WHOLE WEEK!

Algebra sucks. :raritycry: :twilightangry2: :ajbemused: :fluttercry:

i like it and yay more updates then usually

team rocket................well this is a very interesting situation...

She leapt out of the tree and began to gallop in the other direction. If you listened very closely, you could her a faint melody being played as she galloped.

Meloetta?

Well, well, well, Melloeta ended up in Equestria. What are the odds of that?

On a different note, I read Transform as well as this today, and I have to comend you on it, it's really good. I look forward to what you have in store for Oreo.

Rainbow Reshiram when will the next chapter come out for this story because i like this story

4492106 Glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

I haven't updated in 5 million years because I have a small case of writers block and I had to deal with a lot of stuff like finishing 8th grade. :twilightoops:

Since school's out now, I can find more time to update if I get over my writers block. Look forward to it! :pinkiehappy:

please don't have oreo mist get hurt a lot or get all of her magic sucked out of her and i like this chapter

5129417 I'm glad you like it!

And don't worry, Oreo's going to get out of this situation soon. :twilightsmile:

5129445 yeah and i am worried about if Oreo Mist will still be able to do magic since she is getting her magic sucked out of her in this chapter

5129451 Spoliers: She'll get her magic back, so don't worry. She's going to be fine. :raritywink:

5129455 ok and are you going to get started on the next chapter for this sequel soon

5129461 Hopefully! I have a three day weekend ahead of me, so maybe.

5129473 there was an update 3 days ago that changed the site a bit

i was hoping the was going more chapters for this sequel but i guess not and i hope we get to visit Oreo Mist again in another story with a lot of chapters for it in the future

My lord said dun dun dun!

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I have expertise within the field of mathamatics, especially algebraic equations.

Yaaaaaay yaaaaaay you guys have to like the video yaaaaaay

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