Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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Writing the interaction between the Wonderbolt's is a lot of fun in my opinion and I wanted to show public perception of Twilight in this chapter. Other than that, critiques please.
Huh, stroking the spine of the book and apologising to it? This is one of those moments where you forshadowed something without intending to isn't it?
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Semi-intended. It was more to show her frustration than anything else, but yes.
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Come on though, without spoiling it to anyone else reading the comments, you have to admit that it perfectly matches Twilights later character development.
Me gusta! More plz
So is the full thing on a different site, I find it hard to believe you are able to write this well and produce a new chapter daily. 'cause this story is awesome.
(also where can I read the full thing? The wait is killin me)
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Yep! I know, which is rather insane/awesome if you ask me.
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It's up on both my dA and Fanfiction site. Just check my profile and links to my profile page on both sites are there. It's currently not finished on either site, but it is up to Chapter 20. I'm updating here daily until I get caught up, and once I do it'll be weekly updates.
>Hay sandwich
>hay
absolutely no nutritional value whatsoever
3031199 hay has nutritional value, slightly less then grass just from the drying process