Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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Not much to say about this chapter. You've got Dash being Dash and then a slight explanation for Fluttershy. Finally, we see Twilight and some of her logic as well as another side of Nightmare Moon. As per usual, critiques would be awesome.
I've noticed this on the other sites, Nightmare Moon says, If you wish, we can begin today if you wish. The wording is awkward because she says 'if you wish' twice.
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=facepalm= I just reread it this morning. Serves me right for editting while still half asleep. I shall fix that up immediately
You're so right when you talk about the characters being so... different at the start. Seeing Dash gush over Spitfire like that was just... wierd after having read the rest of the story.
What the hell have you done to these ponies Orphius? I hope you're proud of yourself. And Dash is the LEAST extreme example of you butchering the characters.
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I am proud of myself thank you very much.
this fanfic is written more like a book and i love it you have me hooked
I like it too, Spitfire.
Cannot tell you why but reading this twilight give me like batman vibes so god damnit logical it's a superpower