Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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Okay, since this a repost from my other two accounts on dA and fanfiction.net, I'll probably post up a new chapter every day or two until I catch up. Also, critiques are always welcome and highly encouraged.
About damn time you brought this here :L
Now I can finish reading this without going through the pain of fanfiction.net
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YES!!!!! IT'S HERE!!! and yeah, im the same guy from Fanfiction.net! Thanks for taking the suggestion!
I have exactly two thoughts about this.
1) This seems eerily similar to Dusk and Dawn, not that that's a problem, I love this plot line.
2) You could probably use an editor. Her name is "Twilight Sparkle" (no 's' at the end). Also: "I am only going to ask this once, where are the bears of the Elements of Harmony?" bearers
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Everyone comments that it's similar to Dusk and Dawn. As for the editting, I've got a couple of people in mind that I'll be asking to look over future chapters so hopefully that'll cut down on the errors.
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You would not believe the number of people (just one) who harass me on a daily basis to post it up here. So yeah, I caved to peer pressure.
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Well it's here now so that's all that really matters right?
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Yeah, I figured some of my readers may not use dA for fanfiction.net and so for convenience I decided to post it up here as well.
I love these kinds of stories, even if they're a bit or more than a bit dark.
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Just wait till you see the later chapters then.
what!?
you should see my face right now.
i..
what..
WHY did i like that? seriously?
im grinning like a fool and my hands are kind of shaking.
Onward. i need more.
Oh, I like this Nightmare Moon. Shame Luna's still in there. That mean's there's a 67% chance that she'll interfere by giving information, protecting rebels from nightmares, distracting Nightmare Moon (almost guaranteed in the final fight), and likely holding her back so that the final blow can be struck.
TVTropes ruins your life.
Waouh what a bang.
Eager to read what follows.
Jesus... What a start. This story looks very promising.
I didn't know I could clench my teeth this hard