Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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So here it is, the next chapter! I tried to go for an emotional bent with Celestia and I reveal the truth behind Twilight coming back. Amusingly, it was hinted at in the chapter with Shining Armor, Cadence and Gaia and I wonder if anyone managed to pick that up. For once, I won't try to bore you all with a long rambling post so enjoy!
Alright, I was wrong. This was way better than Twilight staying dead.
yia twilight before you go please slap discord with a rubber chicken. tho in all seriousness please don't let twilight stay dead please don't get rid of her. she's the pest pony of the entire lot of em.
well till next chapter cheers.
DAMMIT DISCORD!
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GTFO OF HARMONY
and if twilight doesnt get a happy ending i may be sad
1058806 I bought her back just to kill her again. Yes, I am just that sadistic.
1058813 Who knows... who knows...
1058846 Good ol' Discord, always ruining stuff =chuckles= And who knows if she will or not?
1058859
To your first response; you're a dick
1058859 Alright, yo... wait, you just said you would kill her again!? kill everything
1058865 I know, but it's what makes me so lovable.
1058871 Well I did state her soul will slowly degrade and eventually completely disintegrate completely so I thought it was a given...
1058889 i vote we should kill you
and
um
give me your account and let me write
so twi can have a decent ending
maybe she can die eating a taco or something
1058859 a lot of hope that you bring her back rather than leaving her dead. no wait Celestia still has the crystal with her essence... maybe, maybe i think i figured it out. you magnificent bastard you thanks for that. hopefully you don't become an ass and have discord destroy the memory crystals otherwise twilight will be dead. and we already know that Celestia's night mare is just one step from the edge.
Cheers
1058904 Ha! Wait till you see my next multi chapter fic then. If you think this is bad... well... =grins=
1058907 =whistles= That's a pretty damn nice guess. Wrong, but pretty brilliant. I appluad you for that one.
1058927 I'm fine with sad, but this is just giving me that sick to my stomach feel that I get when looking at non-Spike Rarity shippings. It'll pass, tho.
1058927 was i at least close? or maybe twi is gonna become a spirit like the nightmare?. anyway i know this they would not have won if Twilight had just died in the beginning.
cheers
1058936 Don't worry, the next one is just sad and tragic and all that awesome stuff.
1058964 =laughs= Can't say. Can't give anything away. But those are some seriously sweet guesses.
1058859 And it was a glorious second death. I can't decide which death was better now...
1059002 alright till next chapter then cheers
1059007 Her death? Her death hasn't yet happened! But yes, it will be glorious. And epic. In fact, I've already written it.
Such power... such raw amount of pure awesomeness... Excellent job my friend
I need MOAR!!!
personally now i'm wondering if discord is going to do Twilight a bit of a backhanded favor... a reincarnated twilight could be hilarious... esp with her friends there to raise her...
1059177 Glad you enjoyed it that much! It was really fun to write as well
1059179 That would actually be hilarious...
you deliciously evil bastard... at least I was kinda right! Oh well.. now lets see how this is gonna play out. Will Discord actually cause massive trauma by making his own Twilight Sparkle to torment them? or are they going to pull some Hercules moment and bring Twi back from the true dead? or is Xaldon on to something with the Memory crystal. But I'm personally having a grudge against Trixie... I understand she's aggravated by all the things happening, but she seems way too aggressive to my own liking. Oh well. Sir beautiful bastard, to paraphrase Bane, "When you finish this story, you have my permission to die"
Oh snap. Discord is in the house. And Twilight's gonna disappear for FOREVER?!
1059294
I have got to remember that quote for future reference. =chuckles= And those are all really good questions that I had not thought about, that I might just incorporate into the story.
1059310 ForEEEEEEEEEEVER?
you do know ceasing to exist is about about 900 sextillion times worse than death right . for example if you had to choose between every single person on earth or someones very existence you should choose existence then again that's if you believe in a after life but in your story no one can say there isn't one because you the author said there is therefor my point stands for this story
1059924 Yep! That's why I did it after all
Poor, poor Twilight... I say we sacrifice scootaloo in an epic ritual so she will survive...
BLEH!!!!!!!
1060175 And people say I'm evil...
lets sacrifice Blueblood too
1060280 Okay, now that I can get behind
1059984 im still trying to figure out why twilight would do that though its completely illogical jeese why should she sacrifice forever for some ponies having to adapt to a new ruler when they may or may not even need her help preventing it gah
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AND FOR MAKING MY BRAIN FAIL I SHALL FAIL TO UPLOAD THE CORRECT MEME
i fucking hate tinypic sometimes
1060433 =laughs= Yes! My first broken mind.
1060547
nah my mind broke years ago
you just fucked up my logical part to
also i will destroy you and everything you love souls included
1060567 Sounds like fun
1060652oh trust me it is i am highly experience after all but one question swiss or japanses
(dammit i was about to go to bed then this bleg)
1060718 Yep! After all, it's pretty smart tactics on Discord's part
1060771
I've already read his series and all I can sa is I like to think I'm decent at writing, but I'm not that good at it. I doubt I'll be able to pull off writing Discord at all actually let alone writing Discord to that level of awesomeness
Celestia+Luna+Gaia+Elements of Harmony+Discord+Twilight's memory essence thing... this should have enough power to bring Twilight back... Please?
I maintain my issues with Twilight's reunion with her friends.
Um... other than that...
My brain hurts so much. I need an aspirin. Um... yeah review:
The revelation of Twilight's perma-death was interesting but it's emotional impact was reduced by her normal death from previous chapter(s).
What else... The alicorn fight was cool and mystical and stuff. Using the celestial bodies as a way to track the fight was interesting.
Errm... It felt a little like the elements had less to do in that fight than had previously been hyped up to.
I can't think of anything else right now...
This is the worst review I think I've ever written. Sorry.
It seems like the mane six, despite being the main cast more or less, are becoming less relevant. I expect they'll have to do more against Discord but in regards to the fight with Nightmare Moon they're role felt comparatively minor.
I kind of feel like this story finally starting to wrap up, but now that it is I'm almost saddened by it. It's like this story was at it's best when you were in the thick of the war and the characters were developing. Now that the war is over and the characters are mostly at the end of their character arcs that your sort of just wrapping things up now. Maybe that's just my feelings but it seems to me that the peak of your story was during the second act. Maybe. I don't know my brains tired and I have a headache and...
Whatever it was a good chapter.
1060881 Who knows?
1060883
Well the main issue is, I can't really have the Mane 6 fight Nightmare Moon because they need to charge up the elements and from the show, it seems as though they have to focus entirely on it. Basically, I was stuck between a rock and a hard place. The main thing though is that I'll be making Discord the main "Boss Fight" if you will.
Yeah, the middle section was the best because I could get into the psychological aspect of everything where as now, it's just a bunch of fighting as they finally defeat everything they need to defeat. And well... action is action, not really that indepth engagement the middle sections had.
Words can't describe how against the addition of Discord i am.
I do not approve.
Sorry.
Other then that last few lines, this chapter kept me on my toes, it was downright amazing, and one of your best chapters too.
Well done on that.
Fuck Discord! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
1060977 Well I foreshadowed it for a long time so I had to put him in. I felt as though I had to deal with him as we all know he's canon so... yeah
1061002
Don't give me excuses. you decided to put him in there, and im grumpy because of it.
SOLID TRUTH.
:D
Well... right as one war ends, another begins right from it's wake. I really can't wait to see what kind of role Discord will play.
1060280>>1060291
Nah, lets just torture Blueblood by forcing him to eat his own organs
1061127 =laughs= How dare you! It's honesty not truth that's part of Harmony.
1061988 Let me put it this way, the story is ending in about 3 chapters or so.
1062905 Don't look at me, am I supposed to know?
1063195 All of you are evil
1063195 Starting with his bladder.
1063245
or his colon, with a side dish of his crispy penis, topped with his semen...
1063245 1063252
And here I thought doing what I did to Twilight was evil. Next time I write torture scenes, I'll just ask what all of you think I should do.
Chaos is unpredictable. If you expect it to happy, it won't. But if you truly do not expect it to happy, it will happen!
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“Honey, I’m hooooooome!”
Best way to enter a room ever. 3 moustaches
Oh shit, you did drop that hint about souls not reincarnating earlier when Cadence and Shining were in Tartarus. What a twist. Here, have a few more