Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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Fluttershy OOC that shall be explained next chapter. Other than that, critiques please.
Seeing how I found this on DeviantArt back at chapter 3... and lost it, I've started watching you and faving this on here and Fanfiction, why? Because this is easily one of the better dark fics that I've read. I can honestly say this without any self-regret, that you are far better at Show vs. Tell than I am. I've tried to do it as Tolkien does, I failed at that.
I don't want to spoil anything that happens in future chapters for anypony else that may not have read this anywhere else, but I easily saw the fight in Everfree between you-know-who. It was enough to where I fell asleep after reading it and saw it in my dreams. That is not easy for me, the only other time that happened was when I started reading the Warriors series by Erin Hunter.
You sir, you don't give yourself enough credit. Can't wait for 21 on, hopefully, Friday.
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P.S. I said on DeviantArt and I'll say it here: Country Rarity and Frou Frou Applejack... FLAWLESS WIN!
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I wasn't originally going to post it up here, but got convinced by a friend. Considering there are probably a few people like you who may not have accounts on other sites or whatnot, I figured it would be a good idea.
Wow. That is... You just tripled my ego, I hope you know that. And trust me, that's not a good thing.
Chapter 21 is currently about halfway written so a little behind where I'd like to be, but still on track. Considering I wrote over half Chapter 19 in one night, there's a tiny chance of me not making it.
=laughs= Lots of people seem to love that scene for some (weird) reason.
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HAH! I told you so.
That scene was funny! He thinks so and I agree with him. How did you not intend for that to be funny?
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I don't know, but when I wrote it, funny was not what I was going for?
Okay, I consider myself relatively well versed in physics, but I just can't put my finger on the unit "mpb".
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I made it up based on ppb since it's what biology uses when talking about toxin concentrations in water or whatnot (and I do biology). I wrote it a while ago so I can't recall what it stands for, but if I had to make an educated guess, it'd probably revolve around the word "Magic" or some form of it. I'm a biologist and I fail at physics so I probably altered the wrong unit.
i am really loving this story
WOW, that part at the beginning really confused me, but then I realized that they were using each-others' accents. PURE GENIUS. The fact that they were even able to pull it off is a credit to their skills as an actor. I mean really, AJ with a posh Manehatten accent? Rarity with a country girl accent? Serious Pinkie? A stroke of narrative genius.
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Applejack was a city pony once
I love these capable versions of the Mane 6