Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
Page generated in 0.018 seconds
Total duration
984 users online
83,126 hits today, 1,870,739 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
So a slow chapter this time as I let everything wind down for a bit. Not much to say really.
Ah Twilights' first hallucination. Even if it wasn't really that as much as it was just a flash back, still it perfectly starts the arc of Twilight's complete insanity. I believe this where I first made the joke that inspired phantom Celestia.
826938
Yes it was. I'm glad I took it way I did though since it made the entire thing so much more interesting
I'll be honest with you. I passionately hate it when Pinkie Pie does some impossible thing in a story as serious as this one, only for everyone to brush it off by saying "it's Pinkie," as if she didn't just break the laws of physics. Pinkie Pie is an earth pony. Not a demigod.
Otherwise, pretty decent chapter, even though it probably only serves as a bridge to the next one. There were some grammar error here and there too.
I have a question. Is this story finished? If not, how many chapters are there left before you catch up?
827491
Yeeeeeaaaaah, I got chewed out for that by a couple of different people so you aren't the only one to mention it. You'll be happy to know Pinkie doesn't do anything nearly as physics defying as that for the rest of the fic.
Yep! Definitely a bridge. The main interesting thing here was Twilight's section, but other than that nothing much happens.
Definitely not finished. I just posted Chapter 22 today and I'm currently writing Chapter 23. So nine more days before I catch up? At which point I'll be switching over to my weekly update schedule which is the speed at which I've written the entire fic.
I would have expected more thought into what Twilight had gone through by her friends, being tortured as such could easily give them a reason to explain away Twilight's behavior.
This chapter is my favorite in this story so far. I really enjoy parts of stories when I get to learn of Dashie's past and of her family, no matter how sad. And, it is just icing on the cake for me because you had the conversation be with Spitfire, my second favorite pony. I plan on getting through chapter 18 by the end of the day and then finishing tomorrow. Anyway...yeah, this is amazing.