Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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So here we are, the final canon chapter. I've got a happy alternative ending for all you people who love Twilight as a way of making sure I don't get brutually mauled in my sleep. Anyways, the point of this epilogue is to show that just because the war is over, it does not automatically mean everything is fine. We've got RD who's seeking forgiveness and Rarity who's barely getting any sleep. On the other hand, Pinkie is pretty unaffected, but I wanted to imply that living with three minds is an issue and that Celestia may also be a tad paranoid. AJ though, is totally screwed up. She's still dealing with Truth vs Honesty and now the whole world knows, but she is in therapy. And then there's Fluttershy. I really wanted to bring her characterisation all the way back to her original development which revolved around her actively euthanising patients in her care. Finally, there's Trixie who I deliberately did not mention because I felt it added more than if I had.
Then we get Twilight's section. I rewrote this multiple times and this is the result. I really wanted to show that while she did do everything for Celestia, she also had her own motives behind it all and that she actually wanted to face into nothing.
Anyways, that's my rambling for the day, hope you've enjoyed the fic! Check out my blog post for future projects and stuff.
“Silly Twilight, itwill be!”
Another version of me.A replica of me.A clone.
"Who.Are.You?"
Missing spaces... and I know those weren't there when you had me look at this.
Aww, poor Twilight... I like this ending. Now, for the next...
Given his attitude and apparent glee in what he was doing, Justice would probably be more fittingly if he was named Punishment.
But more seriously you've done a great job on the ending and wrapping things up. I enjoyed seeing how everyone was coping, and how they were still pretty heavily effected by what happened, but where getting better.
I'm a tad confused about Twilight's punishment. Is she living life through the eyes of her counterpart or is she a bystander? Or is she both at times?
Also, great ending. But I'm still going to maul you in your sleep. Seriously though, this is a proper ending. Can't help but wonder if Twilight's punishment will actually be eternal. She became that monster for a reason, after all.
But deliberatly trying to erase yourself to escape punishment is rather... I dunno. Maybe she can get on parole in a few billion years.
I thought her soul disintegrated or something, well at least she still exist somewhere... hopefully Justice returns her to Equestria in a couple of billion years
Finally had it done, was a good ride and this ending just feels right, albeit sad and even though Twilight's ending is satisfactory I'm still mauling you in your sleep regardless. For Twilight!!!
ummm so twilight gets to live a great life for a while then slips out of it then goes back over and over meh that's not as bad as not existing in my opinion so i wont have to fall back into the slow painful category and your death shall be quick and extrousating
:Mind == fucked
Srsly. I didn't get the POV change
I promised myself to never read this ending, only the happy one.
Now that i've read this.
I hate it.
Simply having her "destroyed" to deny her the eternal happiness that is "heaven" would have made it for me, but having her tortured for eternity, do you even grasp how horrible that is?
Nothing deserves that.
So i'm dissapointed, Twilight fucked shit up, and she'll suffer for as long as EVERYTHING exists?
Nice.
I know i said that i liked this story because it was brutal and horrible, but you passed my limit, and.. i'm going to stop, im just angry.
Good luck with what you decide to do now, i'll probably check it out.
Shit man, eternal punishment is just about the darkest concept imaginable...
I'm going to go cry in my shower now.
This ending...... At least it isn't as bad as background pony. I mean. yeah...