Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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I'm going to be honest here, this chapter feels very much like a filler is I explain what's going to happen next chapter, why it's going to happen and what happened to Luna. Next chapter though is going to be awesome.
agreed! o and i love how Phantom celestia is giving twilight hints on what to do next tho i wonder? could she actually be the nightmare disguised in twilight's mind?
Just wondering how long is this story? I really like it and im hoping it will go on for much much longer!
846665 Phantom Celestia is... well... you'll just have to wait and see
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Well I'm currently writing Chapter 23 and since I don't plan over half the stuff I write, the best estimate I can give is roughly 30 though it'll probably be anywhere from 28-ish to 40-ish. LIke I said though, I don't plan anything so it could be under or over quite easily.
Sun Tzu, as in the ancient Chinese military genius?
Not much to say about this chapter except that the character development seems to be handled pretty well.
Also, you're the only person in two days to post an update, and I have 38 unfinished fics on my list. Surely not everyone is at Bronycon?
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Yep! I decided to give the dragons an asian slant despite having the form of european/western dragons. Even the name "Lei" is mandarin. Truth be told, the whole asian slant was a part of the original story plan rather than what it is now, but it didn't really impact it and I felt it'd add a bit more to the world. And amazingly, you're the only person to have picked up on that.
Thanks! I'm going for very strong character development and more of a character driven story so hearing that makes me very happy.
I don't know? I mean, I just submitted a oneshot and it's currently something like 58th in the queue so people are still writing and so forth. Maybe you're just very unlcky? Some of the fics I read have updated so...
846967 I FREAKING LOVE YOU! Sorry but this story has entirely captured my attention.
Nightmare Moon likes torture, she resorts to it far to quickly to dislike it.
FUCK this is why i hate trixie. FOR the love of all that is HOLY trixie she kicked your ass and your entire towns ass the last time you two clashed not to mention FAKED YOUR DEATH and gave you the element BUT STILL you treat her and her freind like fucking garbage GROW A PAIR and stallion up and face it SHE SAVE YOUR FUCKING ASS.but noooooooooooooo you wont so twilight is gong to kick your ass again FUCK me does "BE HUMBLE IN DEFEAT" not register in your SIMPLE little HEAD. AHHHHHHRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
PEACE OUT