Nightmare Moon's returned and Twilight captured. In order to survive she must sacrifice everything
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A bit of a time skip between this chapter and the last one and we (finally) get to some action. Also, first cliffhanger of the fic! There aren't many in this story, so I think it deserves a special mention. Anyways, just wait till you all see the next chapter.
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First of all, please avoid spoilers in the future (hence the deletion of your comment - Sorry!). Secondly, I'm uploading daily until caught up
816065 it is ok, good enough thanks for letting me know anyway how are things going for the story? i'll also try and avoid spoilers in future comments thanks again for the heads up.
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No problems. The chapter is almost done, just need to finish off my current scene then add a second one then apart from some editting, it can be considered done.
This is getting better and better.
One thing though, you might want to switch the km and km2 for simply kilometers and square kilometers. It's a lot neater that way.
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I was actually uncertain of whether or not I should write it out in full truth be told. Because for stuff like time it's often just pm/am and with large enough numbers, it's just straight numbers rather than written out, but I can definitely see what you mean by neatness so I'll go change it.
Oh yeah the first cliff hanger. I'm glad you never made a habit of them but damn this annoyed me at the time.
Anywho I seem to recall I was posting regular reviews of this story on fanfiction at this point so I don't feel the need to be leaving any real commentary here. Not that I really have up till this point but whatever.
Good chapter as always but the one that followed it was epic. That was the scene were Fluttershy =spoilers removed= right? That was a great bit. And to think it only gets better after that.
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Agreed. In my opinion this fic only starts getting good after the next chapter. Everything before that feels like a prologue and truth be told, could be cut and done in the same manner as "Dusk and Dawn" with the whole flashbacks that it uses so effectively.
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I think it was always good but it starts to earn it's place in my top five after next chapter, you're definitely right about that.
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Dat image.
*cough cough* I MEAN
Poor AJ.