Dark Paradise: the TwiLuna Group Collab

by Habanc

Sticky - neovika

Sticky
Written by: neovika

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It had only been a few days since, Twilight sparkle received her new alicorn status. She had been invited to the castle to prepare for her coronation as a princess. She had a lot to learn and so was now heading toward the canterlot archives to find some books on the subject.

As she trotted down the corridor that lead to the archives, she came to a crossroads and was about to go past, that is until Princess Luna crashed into her and the honey pot she was carrying spilt all over them.

“Twilight sparkle are you okay?” Luna asked with concern in her voice

Twilight groaned “Yes, I am fine Princess Luna, If a bit sticky now.”

Luna giggled “Well, that is what happens when one doesn’t look where they are going.”

Twilight internally sighed, Her and Luna’s coat were covered in honey. ‘Luna’s voice is so beautiful.’

Twilight examined every inch of Luna’s body intently.

Twilight quickly broke from her reverie and turned away and blushed.
silence reigned, that is until Luna made a suggestion.

“How about we both get cleaned up?” Luna suggested still blushing

Twilight responded “Yes, okay I’ll just go to my-”

Twilight was cut off as Luna teleported them into her bathroom.

It was a large room with light blue tiles all around even on the ceiling and sunken into the floor was a large square bath. That was suspiciously already drawn.

Twilight gently walked into to large bath that had to be five body lengths wide on all sides. Luna soon joined Twilight opposite her. Twilight watched as she lay down the water coming up to her withers. Luna was still blushing but now she was also fidgeting nervously.

Luna was the first to break the silence. “So Twilight how do you like being an alicorn?”

“I honestly don’t know Luna, It’s was just so sudden. I am glad my friends are all supportive, but i fear I may not see them as much anymore.” Twilight said sadness in her voice.

Luna’s face sunk, her head hung and ears drooped. “Oh I didn’t know. I am sorry Twilight.”

Twilight got up and trotted up to Luna, who looked up at Twilight with tears in her eyes.

Just as she got half way there she slipped and fell Luna grabbed Twilight for her forelegs to catch her and then their muzzles met, their lips joining together.

Both Twilight and Luna were wide eyed, Twilight tried to back away, but then she noticed Luna’s amorous eyes too late as Luna wrapped her forelegs around Twilight’s neck and pulled her in for a long and deep kiss.

Twilight blushed as she melted into Luna’s kiss and embrace. it seemed like an eternity. Luna pulled back to look at Twilight, Twilight and Luna were panting their tongues stuck out as a string of saliva connected them.

Twilight was the first to speak “Luna, will you be my marefriend?”

“Yes Twilight!” Luna kissed Twilight again.

Comments

[Evilhumour]

Meh, not that good. Very poor, my opinion

[CupcakeWSI]

Its not bad. But it could have been better. Sorry

[animeyasha66]

very rushed and too straight forward you should spend more time on details and describing the character's emotions and how that effects their actions, but, all in all not bad

[Kage no Brony]

that is until Princess Luna crashed into her and the honey pot she was carrying spilt all over them.

At the same time, Celestia rounded the corner, only to find them intertwined, their fur matted and their manes stuck together. "What happened?"

Luna, breathless from Twilight laying on her lungs, was the first to answer. "We banged, and we got covered in Our honey."

(There. I fixed the aberrant lack of a punch line to such a perfect setup.)

[ultra1437]

5945214
I read that one, too, for the record.

[Brony Soprano]

6054600 Makes sense. Thank you.

[steelthunder]

6181062 great now i got images in my head of luna wearing judge dredd helmets shouting at ponies with her royal canterlot voice: I AM THE LAW!