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Will/Does Discord appear in this story?
Ha!
The whole chapter is again amazing.
The end though... Made me laugh.
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Big Fonzie thumbs up for being such a great reader and articulate fella. It's great to know that something I wrote made at least one person laugh. I try, but I never really know if some of my humor gets through or just falls flat.
This story has such amazing world building in it, I love it when someone takes the time to build the world and share it with us, great job once again!
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There's a lot going on in the story and I do have thoughts on it, but I'll likely not include him. At least, not for now.
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And you get a Big Fonzie thumbs up as well.
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Yay for Fonzie!!!
This story needs more likes.
well so much for peaceful contact , raiders/slavers, black ops raids with calling cards. Did dark authorize this raid ? it dose have a good timing send tribute from one tribe and raid the stallions with the other and the one pony who has figured it will spin a tail that won't be believed.
Astral: OK, explain it to me again ?
Radiant : the mud ponies have been giving the thieving Pegasus food for tribute, and timed their arrival as a distraction so the enchantress could use unknown new spells to steal our stallions ! you see they used the low and common blood unicorns disguised as casters which over powered the keepers and put up that giant mark on the cliff!
Astral: ZAP
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Scar your alive !
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Well you kind of got it, though you still missed out on some hints I made. When Starless and the others arrived, she asked were Moonglow and Dizzy where and was told that they vanished to do something with a few others without saying what. You could call it a unsanctioned black ops mission done under the table.
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well i don't want to give everything away
mate raid
Welp. I'm all caught up now. Starlets finally has a foal to care for. And somehow I just know she and Ground aren't gonna make it through the coming war.
Loved how you managed to bring up the copper/bronze age with the slavers. I think Wild is both realizing what he almost did to Snap and traumatized from taking the life of another pony.
Love this story and I can't wait for when Celestia does the impossible!
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Sorry, but Starless won't be keeping the foal. Tiger has claimed him, plus she is much too busy being the leader of the movement. She will be like an Aunt to him though.
and so it was, starless is now a parent. xD
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Please direct you attention to the post that is just before yours.👇
Astral will be so mad...
Wait, she already is full of madness.
Ha!
I just loved Snap's inner dialogue at the beginning of the chapter. The The levels of thought she goes through, seem a lot like something that I would do. It is also interesting to see Snap who is so foal crazy compared to Starless who seem afraid of them or doesn't quite know what to do with them. I think they will be really good for each other.
Donkeys, no apostrophe
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