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First image: Broken.
Second image: Bambi? Really?
Third image: Seriously? Freakin' Bambi?
This was headed in a predictable direction, then it took a right turn at the exit just after Weirdness Avenue.
...
I like it.
7974307 I tried to add a bit of color, and bambi 2 had pictures that fit.
If the pictures are distracting, I can just drop them.
7974315 It was only predictable up to the point I wanted it to be predictable. There are much deeper things about Twilight Aurora that have still not been revealed.
7974348 Elements of harmony?
7974387 I won't ruin it, but I will say... warmer.
Spirits of the forest are always finicky and pains in the ars when you are trying to understand what they are up to. Atleast Twilight aurora will have a good family as opposed to her biological mothers 'family'.
7974439 You my friend, get a thumbs up.
I love this story. Have read thru it three times now.
You are a good writer, please keep it up.
More mythology? Interesting.
In a world brimming with magic, why do deer get to be so mystical?
Cut the second 'he'
Cut the second 'to'
up TO watch
I can see why you'd call her Twilight, no doubt an ancestor of the one in the show, but why wasn't there something about 'shock' in her name?
caUsed
Her mane or his?
Fertility magic seems like a really mixed blessing, for reasons that should be obvious.
7975743 Got them fixed thanks again.
Answer: Those two weren't exactly real deer. If you look carefully at their names, Bountiful Wellspring, and Eternal Age you might be able to puzzle out what they really are.
Answer: At that point, it was her mane she was trying to get down. When she touched Strongbuck's mane hers shot up as well.
I get the strong impression that you are a big fan of Bambi...
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The holy Faustian Progenitors?
I can tell my depression is acting up.
Shedding a tear or two and feeling a hitch in my breath at the sweetness of this chapter.
7976245 I do like Bambi 2, but when you look up pictures of deer, you pretty much have only a few choices and almost all of them are bambi. So I used what I could get.
7975985 The thing about the manes wasn't clear. You should say she caught his static.
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7976410 I worked on that part. Hope it's better
Oh, oh my. Someone has been chopping onions here.
Great chapter, i really like where this is going!
Ah the power of HARMONY, and the first Twilight ! Or should I say the first of the Twilight line.
So... they've met some deities who have granted Dove a wish? Huh.
Magic, ain't gonna explain st
I'm not one for hating images in text - however, in this case, the images seemed a bit disruptive to the flow of the scenes.
The chapter itself though was good though! Still a bit confused as to who those two deer were. Maybe we'll find out later, maybe not. But they got quite the godly (or demigod) vibe. We're also slowly seeing how you'll make the Elements come into fruition, huh? Color me intrigued!
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Response: If you look back in the story, you will see a point where Celestia met a strange mare in a strange foggy place with stars. That mare had a silvery coat.
Later, two ponies appeard to observe what happened at the river when Pine Blossom nearly drowned. One was a silvery earth pony mare and the other was a golden earth pony stallion.
Now you see two deer, the doe had a silvery coat and the stag had a golden coat. Their names are also very carefully chosen to hint at who and what they are. Bountiful Wellspring, and Eternal Age.
I hope this helps.
7978898 That does help, thanks! I blame my poor memory for forgetting that stuff
Should that instead be "warily" (ie. on guard)?
I wonder if we've just met The Tree of Harmony.
7982370 Got it thanks. Funny what one little vowel can do to a word.
Ever since last chapter I have a small story in mind:
Soundtrack:
[I may working on this later.]
[Or would this song be more fitting? I think it would be too cliche.]
Small question: I'm not sure I I confuse this with another story, but did you call the unicorns "Star Ponies" before? Or did they have another specific name?
And any chance something even remotely close to this could happen?
7987081 That is quite the dramatic imagining of those two facing off against each other. Such drama!
Yes, I did call Unicorns "Star Ponies. It went along with the Earth ponies, and Sky ponies.
As to your second question. Yes there will be some kind of confrontation between Twilight Aurora and her grandmother Astral at some point, but I won't say as to whether it will be the ultimately deciding confrontation. There are others who have been hurt by her, and may wish to see her atone for her sins as well. I can think of several off the top of my head.
If you write your own story that is of the Herd Life universe. I would very much like to see it. It would be fun to see other imaginings of the characters I came up with.
7975743 Wow, I missed a lot this chapter...
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Of course you can! She's your character!
7987870 That is entirely besides the point. Besides, you do have a point and my besides don't have much of a point. Wait... what was I saying again?
So happy for dove!!!!
7988320 Something about Unicorn horns, I think.
When did dove get a gender swap?
You forgot the "TO" again :P
ok yep i was totally wrong.
this is so much better this way.
ok i will admit i am vary curious about this little tidbit.
aaaand heres twilight sparkles ancestor
Sooooooooooooo many directions.
Twilight...making manes crazy since before Equestria