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Wasn't too late. About when I normally get to bed.
Yes keep the puppers!
Well that was... interesting. I assume this chapter's for the evolution of the domestication of dogs and public decency laws.
Looks like your ellipsis is missing a dot or your period has an extra one.
There's like 5 different errors in this paragraph, mostly involving using the same word too often.
Well that's just adorable. Also... "you think WE SHOULD do"
chance TO do
tip, SHE opened
double her
pulled HER mouth
LATER
Strongbuck's name seems well earned. It seems this was the birth of how bucking became synonymous with rutting. Clever.
Period at the end.
I know where Melodious is going with this. They've already conquered plants and the land, so the logical next step is the beasts. What better way to rid yourself of an ancient enemy than to turn them into an ally.
I wanted to have a bit of fun with this chapter, and I felt that it had been long enough for those three and they needed to bang! I tried to include some usual things like dry-humping because who doesn't like a bit of dry-humping?
7786626 Thanks for catching those little flubs. I fixed them.
Back when I named Strongbuck, I purposely meant to have his name as a double entendre. He's hooked up with a pair of older mares that are as horny as beavers, so of course he would need to give them a strong bucking!
P.S. Sorry, but he's not going to get a cutie mark in it.
7788330 I didn't say it would be his cutie mark, only that his name would be the origin of future slang.
And here's to hoping they both got pregnant. ^_^
7788908 I know you didn't, I just threw it in as a cute little add on.
That's how you do it!
Good chapter!
I'm curious what Melodious is going to do...
Edit: fixed and/or not a typo in the first place.
7792073 Yep, I meant to use rousing there.
adjective
adjective: rousing
1.
exciting; stirring.
Oh, yes, another chapter with mating! I really like when ponies mate with the main purpose of having foals, as it happens in this story.
By the way, for any reason I always imagine the characters in this story as if drawn by Backlash91
http://backlash91.deviantart.com
How do you, the author, imagine them?
Just wanted to let you know that 2 or 3 times while Dove was mating with Strongbuck, you put Bell's name instand of Dove. Other then that didn't see any other typos. Thx for the update.
7793884 I went back through it but only found 1 instance where I used the wrong name and I fixed it. Can you point out the others I can't seem to find them. Thanks.
7793061 Interesting question. I wouldn't say I am drawing an inspiration from any one artiest, but I can say that in my head, I envision the ponies as a bit more equine than they are in the show, especially in their muzzles. I see their faces as being longer, like that of more real equine. I guess the Spirit Horse of the Cimarron would be a good example of how I see them in my head,
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7787744 I am all for a little dry-humping.
A nice warm, fuzzy and sexy chapter. Looking foward to seeing Strongbuck, Dove and Bell's relationship grow.
7818315 Thank you Shadow. That really hit me in the Hearth.
O i like ware this is going.