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shelter
I'm assuming that word was suppose to be 'about'
Nice fun little chapter. Always happy to see this story update!
Yay!
🙌
This whole thing made me smile and grin.
Great chapter in a fantastic story.
Woot! New chapter! Just as amazing as the previous fourty-one, and I'm sure you will continue to produce amazing chapters in the future ;)
Nice chapter. However I think that the last three chapters were a bit slow for me. My investment is not as great as it used to.
Yup, I'm sure that had helped to "cool him down".
Good chapter!
I can't wait to see what happens next.
(Am I right to expect we haven't seen the last of the griffons yet?)
Small notes:
It's Griffon, not Griffin.
Also, for some reason the chapter title doesn't contain the word "chapter" anymore... (Edit: Or is the title supposed to be a joke itself?)
Suggestion: If you make time jumps between chapters please explain them. It's easier then to follow what is currently going on.
And I should mention the Character Sheet is a bit out of date. (Some ponies still missing, some information outdated, Skye written without the "e"...).
But thanks fou doing one in the first place1 Taht makes it much easier to follow the story.
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The missing "Chapter" was a oops. Fixed it.
Griffin is actually the correct way to spell it. Griffin is a mythological creature while Griffon is a dog breed. But after checking a little deeper, I found that the common way to spell it in MLP is with the "O" so I went ahead and changed it to that. Griffin, Griffon, and Gryphon are all correct spelling.
dusty is a stud .
first one to nail the other two tribes a uni cutie and a pegasister great work looking forward
This chapter is one of the best Valentines gift ever. I just love Dusty and Tranquil. There so cute together. I liked how she talked to Skye first. I bet Tranyquil's magic can be quite powerful being able to find control something can be pretty usefull. I also think that her magic is tied to her emotions, like Starlight's magic. So when she gets more confident she will be able to do more. That's my theory at least.
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I hadn't realized that he was the first to have mates of the two other tribes. Go Dusty!
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I had it planed out a while back. With those three together, they would be a union of all three tribes. Earth pony, pegasi and unicorn.
Good to see that Flint actually saw reason. Even if it was after the fact, but he did.
And yay, a new mini herd! Nice to see that Tranquil was able to find someone to genuinely care for, and someone to return her affection.
A nice ruse with the gryphons though - don't think they'd be successful otherwise.
TrAnquil; and you were doing so well, too.
to breathE
to aN old
hastE
Cut that
IT shouldn't
I also knew this was coming. Just go in an bluff their asses off.
Capitalize
Someone's been taking lessons from the Crush Lulu school of flirting.
Having read through this while being sick the past few days, all i can say is ‘holy crap, this is awesome!’
Even just the parts where the earth ponies start developing thier civilization nore and more fill me with such excitement, waiting to see what they develop next. Going from nomads to devolping farms, huts, walls, new weapons and armour and even the beginnings of what seem to be the diarchy. The song Baba Yetu from Civ4 runs in a bear constant loop everytime they create somthing new and it’s such a good feeling.
You have something special here and I, and what seems like many others, are going to love every step forward as you continue.
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Well, thank you very much good reader for your kind words. I am overjoyed that you enjoyed my story so far and hope you will continue to enjoy it all they way to its conclusion.
Turn back AND find someplace to camp
And lose A whole day because of some clouds
And lose A whole day because of some clouds