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Well now, I have mixed feelings on this. On the one hand I feel fate was a bit too heavy handed here. Mustard's ED is one thing, but Mornings premonition feel like overkill. On the other I really like the resolution here, a change of prospective can help bridge a relationship. This was a really nice chapter.
8156852 I agree that it was overkill a bit, but after what happened last chapter. I found that overkill was necessary to get some things to be absolutely clear so I don't have to revisit them again.
Every section about Mustard and/or Morning just makes me want to read this story less each time.
This: '!?' and '?!' annoy me to no end. Interobangs were invented for a reason.
"Now, what could that reason possibly be‽" the author shouted.
"Why," the reader responded with a haughty and elitist tone, "that would be so that you have a non-standard punctuation that combines the functions of two other marks; the interrogative and exclamatory marks and puts them into one symbol, thus you don't have to double-punctuate a sentence, something which, I think we can all agree, is inherently evil when done unto an underserving language. Plus, it helps avoid these sorts of confrontations."
I think you meant "sometimes can't bear it" ... unless they're breaking open their skulls and revealing their brains bare to the world, which would be both a bare brain and rather impossible to bear... and disturbing.
You didn't.
You did.
Very sweet chapter. Good job .
Flutter Fly? The Night Mare? Hmm.
Where can I find alasou?
8157159 Here. http://alasou.deviantart.com/art/Before-there-were-princesses-610307089
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Nothing's stopping you. We aren't keeping you here, and I at least don't care about your preference when it's something as silly as that.
If you must comment learn some tact. It's fine to say: "As a person who doesn't enjoy genderbending, I just didn't care for this chapter at all"
How you phrased it. Not so much.
Not sure if this is a mistake or not. I want to feel it should be "I can't imagine" but it's not like what she said doesn't work...
I feel sorry for Cherry. :(
8157490 I did mean it the way she said it but it does works either way. Hmm, I'll look it over again and see which way would be best
8157490 I decided to go with your suggestion. Thanks again
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Yep! I certainly went there! Ah, ha ha ha
8156943 Because shut up you elitist prick. The VERY common QWERTY American keyboard doesn't have a key for that and not everyone knows what that is. That's mainly on foreign keyboards and it's not used a lot anyway.
8157793 Woah there. No need for name calling. He was only giving his opinion about something that annoys him so there is no need to respond so negatively. It is true through that I don't have that symbol on my keyboard, nor have I ever seen it before. So everyone will just have to live with ?! for the rest of the story.
8157793 Well, you are entitled to your opinion, as am I. I would have thought that the 'non-standard punctuation' would indicate that I was aware is was, well... non-standard, but like I said, you are entitled to your opinion. (Fun fact: I don't have it on my keyboard either)
8158046 It doesn't annoy me that much, I just like to act over-dramatically when I introduce it, people tend to remember it better that way. With that being said, I wish more people would use it and make it more recognized and well known, but I doubt that's going to happen in my lifetime. Side note, if you go into your word processor settings, there should be a 'auto-replace' function. If you wanted to, you could arrange is such that when you type "!?" it auto-corrects to the interobang (you'd have to copy/paste the symbol). If you don't want to, don't, it's your story, you make it how you want.
Digging the idea that Nightmare Moon would actually take her name from a much older evil.
mare'S
Now that's just adding insult to injury. Not only was he changed against his will, but now he can't stand his old favorite foods either. Glad everyone else destroyed the other pools.
back TO normal
This was some refreshing character development.
Opening quotes.
UNusual
Hmm. First hybrid. I imagine it might be something like Fluttershy. Her fan depictions often have her as big and earth pony-like, in addition to being a weak flyer. That, I think is a fairly realistic and ideal combination of traits. The reverse would be a light weight earth pony who's not all that strong.
and A shiver
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Ever seen The Adjustment Bureau? It's about angles who constantly make these tiny adjustment to every day human affairs in order to keep us on the right track. After hearing about the nightmare, it really makes me think there's some equivalent in this world.
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The way I read it, it sounded very condescending. Sorry.
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I only saw some pieces of that movie, but from what I can remember of it, that is not too far off. Though this would be on a much more selective scale than the movie.
Before anyone jumps to any conclusions, Wellspring and Age are not fate.
I really liked how things turned between Mustard and Morning. The gender swap thing was a nice way of having them work out there problems. Only thing that I not sure about is Wellspring and Age. It is only a personal opinion, but I not sure how well I like gods working in the background thing. Maybe as they are more fleshed out in time they will grow on me. But I just don't like how people use them just because they need this to happen and we will have the deities come do it. But that is just what I am feeling now and may change as more is revealed.
8166248 Wellspring and Age are not gods. Nor are they all powerful. They have set limits and they can die. They just have a goal they want to see happen.
8166768 I disagree. The term "god" gets very hazy. The level of manipulation they're capable of, even with limitations on what they can and cannot do, could very easily put them under one deific categorization or another. Just going by vsbattleswiki you see quite a few gods ranging from human level to vague but beyond infinitely powerful concepts beyond mortal understanding.
One setting's god might be another setting's archmage, and yet another setting's average joe.
And you can only go so far with calling something that is X by term Y. "It's not magic, it's waterbending." It's magic, sweetie.
They might not be technical gods, that's up to you to decide, this is true. However, their capabilities certainly seem godlike, and the "death of the author" style of literary criticism allows people to interpret things not outright stated however they wish to, with no regard to your intentions.
8168638 Okay... Well, have fun with that.
Obvious reference being obvious.
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Where exactly did you went here?
(Because I didn't get it.)
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"Where exactly did you went here?"
Answer. It was an under the table reference to the "little blue pill" otherwise known as Viagra, which is known to help with male ED.
I AM FREAKING DONE WHY R THE NAMES SO FREAKING OBVIOUS NOT TO MENTION THE DESCRIPTION OF HOW THEY FREAKING LOOK
Okay sorry about that I’m back rant done and over with still its pretty good story
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Yeah. I didn't give it a lot of work on her name, nor on her daughter's name later. Some names are subtle and clever while others are a brick in the face obvious. Her's and her daughter's names fall in the obvious side. Oh well, can't be perfect every time. If you can think of a good name for her or her daughter, I may change it.