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My goodness another fellow WoT player as well! What lines you working on?
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And before I forget you keep outdoing yourself with each chapter.
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USA all the way. Finished med and TD'S, almost done with heavy. And thanks for the complement.
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Some American armor is always fun but I am a particular fan of the German and Japanese super-heavies
Exiting. Keep up the good work .
Great chapter! Just what I needed for a little pick me up! Poor Strawberry. Though, I do have to question something. How powerful is little Twilight? Because right now she's kind of close to being unstoppable. I mean, cleansing the poison victims would be bad enough but she also made a huge aurora in the sky that required the use of a dangerous magical artifact to dispel. I'm not necessarily complaining, but this foal is like a week or two old and she's already more powerful than pretty much every other unicorn put together.
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When it came to making the aurora in the sky. Aurora was able to do that by drawing the magic of hope that Celestia was giving to the room with her song and turning it to physical form. She was like a prism taking the light of hope and casting a rainbow with it. It was a powerful act, but it also wasn't just her doing it. It was everypony in the room working together.
When it came to the curing the poison. That one was caused by her surging out of control much like how Twilight Sparkle did when she took her entrance exam and turned baby spike into a giant dragon that burst out of the ceiling while also turning her parents into potted plants and holding the judges entrapped in a magical field.
Flurry Heart shattered the Crystal Heart when she had a temper tantrum as well, but she was also a Alicorn, so I'm not sure if she counts.
now I fear for sky she never made it to the settlement
grew toO loud
No need for comma
So after being made to see how her people have been total assholes, Starless now has had her ass handed to her by a blind newborn. I think she's been adequately humbled.
...
I stand corrected.
over TO the
Because you are tsundere pony.
Comma before but.
FUTILELY
fighting toO
Double 'the'
You say 'her' in reference to a colt.
next TO her
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Good Catches like always.
You say 'her' in reference to a colt.
Actually, I said "her" in reference to her. She nuzzled the colt to settle her own nerves.
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Thanks, but that latter bit is still left confusing.
All these adults worrying over a colt who can clearly fend for not only himself, but others as well is... getting old at this point.
Yep, I called it - the spiders attacked the ones stationed a bit further from the village. At least they haven't been taken, even if a few were downed.
This won't be pretty.
Morning just trolled Dandelion. She did catch on quickly though. Let's see if she'll keep the secret or blab it out.
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Indeed, but there's still that ingrained mentality of adults protecting the young which is, in a lot of cases, instinctive.
Sure, many know Ash can handle himself, but his own age makes others feel the need to protect him anyway. Just give it time, even if it's annoying.
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Ew... WoT
You should play a real tank game like War Thunder... or join me in Dreadnaught.
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I realize that fully. But an annoying thing with a reason and/or justification is still an annoying thing. Ash has proven time and time again that he's very capable, and I don't see any wild beasts giving him a fair fight anytime soon.
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Adults, amirite?
As for no beast being able to give him any reasonable challenge... give it time. That spider queen looks promising.
That picture looks great! Thanks for adding it! (And thanks for the note, otherwise I would have missed it.)
That would be the understatement of the entire story arc...
Sounds like a plan to me.
At first I expected an ransom-note...
Shouldn't she had already arrived ath the village?
Or did I miss something?
Great chapter!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Shouldn't she had already arrived at the village?
Or did I miss something?
She left but never arrived at the village. Her fate is a mystery.
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(I'm sorry.)
Just a quick question... Is the character Prim Primrose a reference to Primrose Everdeen from The Hunger Games, or just merely a coincidence? BTW, awesome chapter as always, but I'm going to need to slow down, or else I'll catch up. I already only have 3 chapters left before I do... must fight urge to read!
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I have tried to watch the first hunger games movie and managed to get most of the way through. Otherwise, I have not watched nor read any of the books. I just didn't like it all that much. When it came to Prim Primrose. No. I did not name her after Primrose Everdeen. What I have done on several occasions when I need to come up with a name was google up flower names, trees, rocks, or just whatever, and look down a list. When I find one I like for the character, I try to match something about what I want the character's personality to be like.
I remember struggling over Primrose's name and finally hit on the fact that the Prim part of her name meant -stiffly formal and respectable; feeling or showing disapproval of anything regarded as improper; and I liked how the two names fit.
Peers told me once I had a talent for coming up with really good pony names but the fact is I use the online Thesaurus a lot to help me. I also think of random characters like, oh lets say "Daisy Duke" from the Dukes of Hazard, and start thinking of names to rhyme with it like Daisy Brook, Daisy Sniff, Daisy Risk, or Daisy Luck. When I don't like any of them I just start throwing random things out like Daisy Day and find I like it and off I go. Daisy Day. I do kind of like that one.
Fun Fact. Hoof Strike has only said two sentences in the whole series. "My name is Hoof Strike, and Would you please keep it down? I'm trying to sleep."