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Another good chapter! I am starting to like starless here and I want to see how she continues to interact with ground and snap dragon.
Ohhh man, Snap is going to end up chaseing Starless right into her brother. She's trying to play the role of a sister, but when she realizes that Star isnt playing along shes going to end up having to push them together.
YES! New chapter! Shh, reading.
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Sorry for the short comment. Enjoying the story, just busy.
Mm...
Not bad. Good story chapter.
Okay you'vegot me hooked even more.
Nice. Not much else to say really.
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Oh definitely. Read on and you’ll see more.
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A while back, I was considering making a cleaner version of this that wasn't so mature. It would take a bit of work and if I was to do it, I wouldn't start until I finish the story first.
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I nearly didn't catch it. I had already posted the comment, and only noticed the typo in my post-posting review. These typos are getting sneaky.
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It was actually about 4 am when I wrote that comment
That may be true, but how often would anyone plan something like this?
Random stallion from the background. "Only a stallion for such a short time, and already an embrassment to stallions everywhere..."
Since I heard you like Star Wars quotes...
(Only Yoda's speech at the beginning.)
(Fitting, since they call it 'victory', while the new spider queen just retreated to lick it's wounds.)
Can't the mares simply use the river, too? Or let those poor stallions use the bathhouse,?
Also, I should add that I liked the scene with Celestia and Aurora.
Good story!
I'm curious what will happen next. Will everything stay quiet for a while (they would have deserved it) os is the next crisis already at the horizon?
Found a small typo:
Cute, but nomming is still written with two "m".
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Great input.
Spellchecker was absolutely no help in telling me how to spell "nomming" I don't know why? It's a perfectly good word. I think we need to speak to someone about why this is not on spellchecker.
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The reason I found your story was because it was in the feature box.
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Oh. I didn't know that. Interesting
Abother great wrap up chapter. I like how Grand Vista and Tranquil Charm are now part of the herd. I hope Starless can work things out for herself. Understand her conflict. It is hard to throw away life times of work for something better because it feels like you are nullify all that sacrifice. Aurora magic sight gift from Celestia's is also very nice.
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Dark limited himself to just one mate by choice. A few of the others are also following his example but it's still far from the norm.
Strongbuck-Dove-Bell
Brightstar-Berry Shrub- Daisy Petal
I haven't mentioned it but Sage Brush has several other mates. Though all of them but Melodious is too old to have any foals now. With his other mates, he had two older daughters still in the herd. Greenhoof and Milkweed. Also not mentioned is that Birch Bark has several mates as well.
Hoof Strike only has Tiger Lily for obvious reasons.
There are also hints at upcoming multi-couples. If readers look, I'm sure they can match up the couples I have planed. Also I am considering having a F/m/m couple.
Period before quote.
overheaRd
Cut second was
Also, I'm liking the implications here. The dark magic was seeking to snuff out the light of of a blooming civilization. The spiders were just tools to that end.
Oni-chan!
feelingS
both OF you
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Thanks again. Only 5 this time! Amazing! Could it be that I'm finally getting a little better at this writing thing? Magic 8ball says... ask again later. Darn!
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Could be that. Could be me waiting gives other people to catch more mistakes before I show up. Who can say?
Starless needs some serious talking to.
Then again, it's really hard to simply shirk something you've been taught your entire life, and the pride in her being a Caster is one of those things.
Still, it'd be a good idea if she sets down with Ground and his family, else that might end with a lot of pain before it gets any better.
Also, Madness, huh? Well if that wasn't ominous.
Also, Celestia's selflessness shone through once again - instead of taking the gem for herself in hopes of nursing the power back up, she gave a blind foal the ability to see.
Well, I put off reading this chapter as long as I could before its taunting got to me, and I sat down and read it. Yet another amazing chapter, but now, I'm sad that I'm all caught up, and have to wait for the next chapter to be uploaded. But I will be checking this story daily, and as soon as I see it's up, I'll be reading it. I look forward to the next chapter, and the next arc.
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The wait shouldn't be too much longer. Chapter 41 is almost done, just working on the last part of it before sending it to Peers to have him edit it.
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Yay
That’s so profound. How in the world do you come up with this stuff? Bravo!