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PeerImagination. Your proofreader is PeerImagination. Lol
7631271 It's super late, how am I supposed to remember something like a name!?
See, Cadence/Twilight should be thankful that somepony else was able to pick them up from cosmic daycare. Celestia had to do it on her own!
Astral plane is best surveillance opportunity, confirmed.
Hiya Fausticorn!
She's transforming into a
super saiyanalicorn!I somehow suspect you did not intend to devote an entire line to this backslash.
I think our child may be magic!
Jokes aside, good stuff. We have our first glimpse of the other pony tribes!
So while earth ponies are only just now discovering the roots of civilization, unicorns and pegasi seem to already have them, perhaps even griffons too. The unicorns seem desperate to maintain their power in fear of their ruler's wrath, which I imagine will play a part later. As such stories often go, I suspect a grown Celestia and Luna will leave their family and travel the world in search of wisdom, returning centuries later to save their people and rule as alicorns since none of the other tribes can get their shit together.
Amazing chapter as always! Looking forward towards more!
-lookig through notifications_spots new chapter_- uh... -clicks without a thought - xD
guess celestia wasn't ready yet. and an eclipse? mare can say its nothing all she wants, but luna beign born on an eclipse is not coincidence. -eagerly awaits next chapter-
7631349 Fausticorn? Fausticorn!? FAUSTICORN!!! You need to trademark that!!!
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It isn't mine - it's just something I heard around the fandom.
7634113 I have no idea what it means, but it sounds cool.
7634627 Faust started FiM, so she is considered an honorary alicorn of creation by the community.
Look around Deviantart and you'll find artwork easy enough.
7635071 Oh, Lauren Faust! Fausticorn. I get it now.
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I just caught up now, and I have to say, this is one of the best stories I've had the pleasure of reading. I look forward to future chapters with glee.
7636016 Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed my story so far.
Good chapter!
I suspect we haven't seen the big wolf for the last time.
Found some typos:
Edit: fixed.
7641817 Good catches on those double spaces. They happen when I edit a sentence wording around. Most of the time I catch them right then and there, but in this chapter I did it a lot more then usual.
I'm loving this story more and more!
7646708 Why thank you. And might I say, I am loving your complements more and more!
I only remember this mistake because it was funny but at the very end "She not" is supposed to be "she's not" right? Lol
Holy shit the comma splices are real and plentiful
8144453 Talk to Peerlmagination about that. I went back through and cleaned it up a bit. There was quite a few.
Even newborn Luna knew the Royal Canterlot Voice.
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Every baby does.