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Ah, dog domestication now.
Eh... politics isn't really the most engaging topic, even ignoring recent events. I would think it more interesting to have pony's reactions to it instead:
"So, can Sky stay with us now?"
"Dunno. We'll have to ask the Mare's Council."
"We have a Mare's Council?"
"Yep."
"...is it really okay to just let the mares run everything?"
"Ash, Ash, Ash. The mares always ran everything. It's just that now it's official."
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Also this.
So, the beginning of diamond dogs... You think the spider monsters are some type of protochangelings?
7711072 They are wolves not Diamond dogs. Its the start of domestication. And the giant spiders are just giant spiders as seen in the official MLP Comics.
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7710864 That certainly would have made the Chapter a lot shorter, and easier to write then.
I have to say im enjoying this story please keep going.
7711242 ditto
From agriculture to animal husbandry.
Feed them with some unwanted ponies, then domesticate them.
Good chapter!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Found an typo(?):
Either one or three dots, but not two.
A very interesting turn of events. I always enjoy seeing this update. This story has a very different feel and tone them many of the other stories I read.
7712897 Well thank you. I appreciate the honest impute. I'll keep doing my best.
And thus began the legend of Romulus and Remus, founders of the ancient Earth pony city of Roam.
Have you by any chance read the books about Ayla the cave woman? I guess similarities are inevitable given the setting.
7713204 No, I never heard of Ayla the cave woman. Any parallels between this story and that one is a purely unintentional coincidence.
7713102 "Great! Just great! Now I can't use those names. Thanks a lot!" I walk across room to open the door, stepping through I slam it behind myself, sounds of my footsteps march away to the sound of a car door opening and closing. The engine revs up and the tires sequel as I speed away, to fade off into the distance.
Seriously, despite thinking about it for a while, I haven't at yet come up with names for the two pups. It never occurred to me to invert the Roman origin story in such a way. Very clever of you.
But if the pups are Romulus and Remus, shouldn't they be the founders of the ancient Wolf city of Roam?
7713474 Hey, ponies are pretty accepting. I'm sure they'd not object to pony-friendly wolves founding a city. Or having one named for them, or something...
7728283 Good catch! I sit corrected!
Domestication begins.
Bravo on having Bell take in two pups. That was beautiful
And so...domestication begins...