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I worked on writing Celestia's song for 5 days straight. It nearly drove me mad. I hope it turned out okay.
well discord follows in his moms hoofstep? I guess.
8062810 it was good!
Hmmm, greed broke the world and now the Unicorns use her to keep their power. Its fitting really, having their seat of power so close to the Spirit of greed for so long, its no wonder they began to crave more and more power. Its likely Astral's grandmother felt her desire to have children was worth loseing the power of the gem, but greed has a way of twisting the most benign of desires. my guess is the gem is, or will become the Alicorn Amulet. Or at least has a similar property. Eventually her simple desire to have children turned into a desire to have the strongest most powerful children. I belive Avarice's chaos pollutes the area the Unicorns live. After generations of living their it has almost consumed them.
Why WERE Dark
Comma before closing quotes.
Ash WERE there
I trust I don't need to point this one out.
In reading the part about the unicorn filly, I imagined one of my characters stepping in and giving them all a speech. He'd describe how remarkable they are for advancing so quickly, doing in just a few years what it takes most cultures to do in centuries. "Acknowledge your greatness, and make peace with the fact that a simple delayed sunrise will not be your end." And then, just when everyone's spirits are lifted, he'd blame Celestia, calling her lazy for not doing the unicorns' job, because he is a troll.
Forgot the period
throwS
Unicorns are cunts. I'll keep saying it until you offer significant evidence to the contrary.
Remember that troll character I mentioned earlier? Well, at Astral's distress, he would step out in the guise of a unicorn and tell her she was being usurped by her granddaughter, her blind granddaughter. And then he would laugh maniacally just to screw with her before vanishing in a ball of fire.
I think you meant to say NETHER. You make this mistake twice.
Lifting
Huh. So if all these negative concepts are given conscious form, does that mean the Elements also have living embodiments somewhere?
cut the 's
talon. Taking it
8063293 Thanks for catching all those happy little typo's
Neither is correct. When a unicorn teleports, they pass through a space of nothing that is neither here nor there, or otherwise known as the "neither." The "nether" is from minecraft I think and it just means "lower in position".
8063327 If you want to distinguish this as its own place, how about calling it the neither-nor, or something?
twilight sparkles grand mare X10 to the Nth power was a power house as well
You cheeky little bitch! When you granted her wish for a foal you cursed the foal and her bloodline with avarice didn't you! Don't bother denying it you crystallized minx! Cursing folks with your element in order to sow your hubby's element... were you hoping it would attract his attention and prompt a rescue? Silly Avarice, he is glad to be rid of you! Now he actually gets hot water, and covers! Why would Strife ever want to go back to sitting in the corner with nothing while you horde all the "everything"?
8063030 Yes, you are right. That is the gemstone that will be in the Alicorn Amulet. I just can't say that in the story because it hasn't become it yet.
In ancient times, having children was very important. Queens have been killed because they failed to produce offspring. With the unicorns of this ancient time, having as many foals who are magically strong is very important and will elevate or diminish a families standing in the unicorn herd. When it came to Astral's grand-dam, she was infertile because of the gemstone. Once she no longer had possession of the gemstone, she was then able to become pregnant. Avarice of course didn't share with her the real reason why she was unable to conceive.
I believe you meant (Avarice's greed) pollutes the area the Unicorns live.- which is quite correct. Her close presence can and does have a bit of an effect on them, but only to a certain point.
8063882 Oh, you have no idea... yet
Well that certainly answered some questions. I imagine that Avarice being an immortal spirit is playing the long game and knows an opportunity when she sees it. Nice bit of world building.
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I say chaos because Avarice is a Draconequus, a spirit of disharmony. Her magic would be tied to chaos assuming that it is the counter force to Harmony. Greed would just be the aspect her chaos would take. This assumes the headcannon of Draconequus being chaos aligned Alicorns. So might not apply here.
A distant relative to the Flower Ponies?
There is no doubt in my mind her own behavior is already sealing her downfall.
This can't end well. It simply can't!
Good chapter!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Small question:
Her full name is "Twilight Aurora". What would be her short name? "Aurora" or "Twilight"? Or neither of these, because she doesn't have one?
(Still hoping for an Astral vs. Aurora. But it seems fate may have different plans.)
[See 7987081. I really should do something with that one...]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYIHrY8K8Wk
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I have been calling her Aurora to make it simple, when I use Twilight, it will be with her full name.
8064154 Aren't Greed and Hardship just as disharmonic as Chaos?
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I would think it would depend on your view of how Chaos and Harmony interact. The way I see it Chaos is a greater force that directly opposes Harmony with several lesser elements that act to bring about Chaos. These would be forces like greed, lust, fear, ect. Kinda like how the elements of harmony are equivalent to Friendship, but how Love also represents harmony and could be represented by the elements. Avarice could be one aspect of chaos representing greed and her power would grow from the chaos that comes from it. Discord would be the same except he gains power from the chaos brought by conflict, like from broken friendships.
I wonder how long will it take Astral to find little Aurora. Also, the humiliation if she realizes that her late daughter's only foal which she has shunned outranked her in magic... while asleep and by accident. Buuuuuurn :rainbnowlaugh:
Avarice is going to have a lot of fun - she's imprisoned, yes, but something tells me she knows who the caster of the aurora is.
Discords mother!?! That's a awesome idea for the story and I love the world building so far!
I can't wait to see the lead up to what the three tribes were like before the windgoes happened and finding of Equestria. Also I have to wonder if the gem is the seed of Harmony... I wonder if Ash becomes the Tree of Harmony?
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The gem is the gem you see in the Alicorn Amulet.
Is the sky gonna rain blood instead of chocolate milk? Or are the clouds going to be made of the compositions of ponies as oppose to cotton candy?
My spot
discord is a clever son bitch aint he
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He is, and so is his mother.
Ancestor to the flower ponies?
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Quite possibly!
Note- I just changed the cutie mark from a tiger lily to a pansy because there is another character with a tiger lily and I forgot I used it on her.
I don't usually find typos, but here's one. I demand services and consideration in return.
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That one has slipped by a lot of readers. Good catch.